FIC: Keeping Up With the Joneses Ch. 11

[dancingelf88]

Title: Keeping Up with the Joneses
Author: dancingelf88
Rating: Mature
Pairing: Luke/Noah
Disclaimer: If only….
Summary: Luke and Noah Jones live a mundane happy life until a secret shatters their world

Chapter XI: Plan B

Comments

[juliadw]

wow!!!!!!! loved the fic! So very very godo to read!!!!!!! Thanks for sharing!!!

[dancingelf88]

Aww thank you so much! Really happy that you enjoyed it so much. Thanks for commenting!

[jackie_oh]

Okay. Now I really want to rewatch Mr. and Mrs. Smith. This was the perfect blend of the two! Plus, the boys as competing spies? So fucking NNGGHH.

Awesome job!

[dancingelf88]

I rewatched that shit so many times for this fic and I still love it. Thanks Jackie! I'm happy you enjoyed it! Really my only goal was to have the boys with guns...because HELLO. <3

[natashaodwalla]

This was so fun!

I absolutely LOVED it. My favorite part of the whole thing was how you had the characters interact. I loved the interactions between Maddie and Luke, Casey and Noah and of course, Luke and Noah. It was hilarious and a breath of fresh air. DEFINITELY not like any nuke fic I've read before. :D

I also loved how even though it was this completely different AU and they were trying to KILL each other (but not really), you still had some very notable traits that stick to the canon of the show. Noah was calm and steady and Luke was irrational and a bitch. Ha! LOVED.

And the action was killerrrrr. Anytime you can hand Noah a gun, I am there. ;)

I'm so happy you did this! It was amazing!

[dancingelf88]

Thanks Tasha! I've always loved the friendships in the show and wanted to add that element of it to the story. One of my biggest worries was kind of sticking to the basic essence of the boys...I'm happy that I didn't mess that up. bitchy!Luke is a fave of mine and guntotin!Noah is NNGGG.
Love you muchly!

[dancingelf88]

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Thank you so much! The movie's pretty freakin awesome though I will say. Thank you for commenting!

[crownroyal_51]

This was a fun read! I enjoyed your take on "Mr & Mrs Smith". I especially love how one minute they were ready to kill each other and the next they were ripping off clothes. I liked how you involved Casey and Maddie in the story. They were perfect partners for the boys!

[dancingelf88]

Thank you!!!! I love that movie and I love writing Nuke versions of things. Happy you enjoyed it!