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dancingelf88

FIC: Keeping Up With the Joneses Ch. 11

Jul 26, 2011 18:22

Title: Keeping Up with the Joneses
Author: dancingelf88
Rating: Mature
Pairing: Luke/Noah
Disclaimer: If only….
Summary: Luke and Noah Jones live a mundane happy life until a secret shatters their world

Chapter XI: Plan B
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luke/noah, nukebigbang2011, alternate universe, [fanfic], [atwt]

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dancingelf88 August 12 2011, 21:53:44 UTC

Thanks Tom! I'm glad you enjoyed it. And I had to put Maddie and Casey in there. Thank you for commenting

moongirl24 August 18 2011, 09:53:50 UTC

As someone who hasn't seen the movie and who didn't even realize the story was based on a movie until I was halfway through, this story took me completely by surprise! But I really liked how fast paced and intense it was, and how, despite everything, the boys really did love each other. This was really entertaining, you've done a great job! :)

dancingelf88 August 18 2011, 12:24:31 UTC

Aww thank you so much! You should see the movie...it's quite entertaining! I'm really happy that you enjoyed the story. NA thank you for your sweet comment!

dazzling_icer August 22 2011, 02:05:35 UTC

Semi!

This was seriously so great! I've never actually seen Mr. and Mrs. Smith! I've always wanted to, though! But now that I've read this...I don't know if I can cuz I will just be picturing Van and Jake instead of Brad and Angelina! Whoops!

But I loved this! Great action and suspense! And HOT SEX, TOO!

AND OMGGGGGGGGGG WALL!SEX! YOU HAD WALL!SEX! THAT'S MY BIGGEST SEX KINK IN FIC ASIDJAKSDJKLASJDKLASJDKLASJDKASDHAKLSJDHAKSJD!!! I WAS SO EXCITED WHEN I READ THAT! SO HOT!

But aww, I loved their banter and how much they just loved each other the whole time without realizing it! You did such a great job with this!

Congrats on finishing! And thanks for sharing this with us! :D

dancingelf88 August 28 2011, 17:58:07 UTC

Thanks so much Holly! Nuke isn't Nuke without banter...it was fun writing it. Heehee happy the sex satisfied!
LOVE U MUCHLY

123cariad August 29 2011, 17:09:40 UTC

Keeping up with the Jones was outstanding full of drama and smiles , I found the Dr Oliver Knee capping very funny lol the whole interaction between Luke and Noah at his point had me laughing thank you so so much for a wonderful afternoon read x

dancingelf88 August 30 2011, 13:06:30 UTC

Thank you so much for such a sweet comment. Heehee everyone seemed to enjoy the kneecapping scene LOL. I'm happy that the Nuke!banter amused you. Glad to provide some fun afternoon delight. <3

frances_veritas September 2 2011, 19:24:59 UTC

So not gonna lie, I was surprised at how much I really really REALLY loved this story. Cause at first I was like, 'wait, where is she going with this?' Especially at the beginning when that explosion happen and it seemed like you weren't going to explain and it seemed so random and then I was just so confused.

BUT THEN.

I slowly realized you were doing a Nuke version of Mr. and Mrs. Smith and OMFG I LOVED THAT MOVIE SO MUCH AND FKJHASFKJADSHAKJFHADSFKJASFDS. This was so. freaking. PERFECT. Seriously. Was hooked from the very beginning to the very end. So very enjoyed the epic fight scene they had against each other.

AND THE SCENE WHERE THEY HAVE REID CAPTIVE AND FOUND OUT THAT THEIR BOSSES WERE REALLY OUT TO GET THEM WAS FREAKING GLORIOUS. Their banter was spot on and had me laughing like a lunatic. And I just love this story OMG I CANNOT EXPRESS IT ENOUGH DSFJAHFJFHADFAKJDFS!

Awesome job!

dancingelf88 September 5 2011, 12:38:51 UTC

THANK YOU MOEY!
Creating mass confusion makes me happy. Heehee but I'm glad that i worked in the story. I love that movie. I can watch it over and over. I loved writing the captive!Reid scenes. Score for making you laugh. Thanks for commenting! <3