In the dark

[dani_the_girl]

Title: In the dark
Fandom: Torchwood
Rating: PG-13 for some swearing and boy-kiss.
Summary: After they get home from the Brecon Beacons Ianto has a bath, Jack is blindfolded and then there isn't sex.
Notes: I originally started this as part of Yesterday night, tomorrow morning but ended up deciding they worked better separately. Thanks go to ahlai for

Comments

[lizz_112]

That's so sweet, and it fits so very perfectly with how they progressed into ...uh...shaggineachothersenseless land.

Well done!

[dani_the_girl]

shaggineachothersenseless land

Yeah, I'm going to get to that bit eventually :) Thanks.

[wishyouwashhere]

Very good; engrossing and subtle. I loved so many of the small descriptive details...such as "the light behind the tie darkens"...all combine to make a very evocative story.

Tiny typo: "they're unsettling close" possibly meant to be "they're unsettlingly close"?

[dani_the_girl]

Thank you - both for the compliment and the catch!

[ahlai]

Just to let you know I still love it! :D

[dani_the_girl]

Thanks!

[antelope_writes]

Elegant and nicely written, and very in character.

[dani_the_girl]

Thank you very much!

[adafrog]

Oh so very sweet.

[dani_the_girl]

Thanks - I thought it was about time I was nice to them :)