In the dark

[dani_the_girl]

Title: In the dark
Fandom: Torchwood
Rating: PG-13 for some swearing and boy-kiss.
Summary: After they get home from the Brecon Beacons Ianto has a bath, Jack is blindfolded and then there isn't sex.
Notes: I originally started this as part of Yesterday night, tomorrow morning but ended up deciding they worked better separately. Thanks go to ahlai for

Comments

[eandh99]

It is very sweet, nice to see them working towards a relationship. Oh, and there are a couple of times "bought" should be "brought".

[dani_the_girl]

Thank you - I'll go fix those now!

[vipersweb]

Oh this is lovely... very slow and romantic, very natural feeling.

[dani_the_girl]

Thank you!

[louiex]

Oh I really liked this :D It works very much for them at this stage in the series and where we know they're headed~

Great story!

[dani_the_girl]

Thank you!

[piss_and_ink]

This was so very good. I really think Countrycide was teh most possibly messed up thing that could have happened, and the follow-up is bound to be rocky. I like that Jack stays with Ianto, and accommodates to his modesty so he can have a bath, and how he's always aware of Ianto and how he's moving stiffly, or how he's still hurting (nice subtle mention of the baseball bat. esh...) And great writing.

[dani_the_girl]

Thank you very much! I really love Countrycide. I think the end of that episode shows Jacks protective side so clearly - you don't fuck with his team or you'll regret it. And having him explicitly save Ianto's life has got to be a help in terms of getting them back onto good terms again. And then there's the looks they give each other during the snogging conversation.

[phineyj]

This is good! I do like Jack POV. Looking forward to reading more.

they haven't tried to blame it on the closing down of rural post offices yet, but Jack's sure they'll get there; everything that goes wrong in the countryside is down to the closure of rural post offices That was a hilarious little aside.

[dani_the_girl]

Thanks! I really enjoy writing Jack POV so I'm sure more will be forthcoming :)