Comments | danyellaskyler: [Fic] Hide and Seek

danyellaskyler

[Fic] Hide and Seek

Sep 19, 2009 09:08

I renamed The Iruka Bet to Hide and Seek
Also now finished. so new stuff towards bottom.

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( Hide and Seek )

other: fanfiction, fandom: naruto, fic: hide and seek

Comments 16

dark_kaomi March 7 2009, 19:39:20 UTC

I love your work. I laughed so hard when Ibiki showed up. The word play is amazing, I've never seen anything like it. Witty and comedic. I can't wait to see what this alliance has wrought.

Hey. danyellaskyler March 7 2009, 19:42:54 UTC

I'm glad you liked it.

Yeah, the Ibiki part was great. It just popped into my head and the entire Nudist Zone form around it. Well that and Naruto and Kiba mooning Sasuke.

I'm glad the wordplay came out so well. Iria's fun to write. Especially since I can have her do just about anything funny and it's believable.

As to the alliance... I don't know yet. We'll see.

tiddarifka March 7 2009, 22:32:42 UTC

You had me laughing from start to finish. More, more, please!!!

Yo. danyellaskyler March 7 2009, 22:35:47 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it so much. I'm trying to finish it. But the muses are teases, and sometimes abandon me.

demondreams March 8 2009, 06:23:24 UTC

the nudist zone. Oh god the nudist zone! And Ibiki!

This bit of dialog just killed me, seriously!
"Oi! Ibiki! How's it hanging?"
"Pretty good, I like to think."
Iria, Kotetsu, and Kurenai all grinned and flashed him the thumbs up complete with pointed leers. "Yes it is!"

And Shikamaru just strolling through ::gasping sides laughing::
The alliance with the GaiLee imitation. When Naruto finds out that Iruka is actually Iria he's going to WORSHIP that man!

Yo. danyellaskyler March 14 2009, 17:08:30 UTC

Yup. The Nudist Zone. It's currently before the Council to make it permanent.

I loved that dialogue myself. Makes you wonder about the history those four share.

Yup. Shikamaru would be annoyed, but not changing his path because it'd be to troublesome.

Yeah, Naruto's going to love Iruka when he finds out. He'll want to learn everything he can from Iruka.

Re: Yo. demondreams March 14 2009, 20:14:06 UTC

Yup. The Nudist Zone. It's currently before the Council to make it permanent.

I could see a few consequences of this. Housing costs in the district would SKY ROCKET and there would be huge waiting lists to get an apartment there, they would have to have some sort of off site closet for the people who live there so they can change their clothes, two words: Tourist Attraction!

I firmly believe that Ibiki is a giant teddy bear under all the scars ^_^

Re: Yo. danyellaskyler March 14 2009, 20:18:53 UTC

lol. Yeah. Iria is a great catalyst. And you have that council member that started the whole thing pissed off.

I love Ibiki. He's a great character. And remarkably well adjusted.

cybremly_v3 March 8 2009, 06:33:31 UTC

From the moment you mentioned the suble genjutsu embedded in the bedrock, I hoped and wished for that unholy alliance to happen. I can't wait to see what Iria instructing Naruto in the fine art of creating your own world does to various citizens of Konoha.

Yo. danyellaskyler March 14 2009, 17:10:23 UTC

I just thought the idea was great. Although it came after I thought of the scene where the alliance was formed.

Yeah, that'll be... mandates and counseling galore.

Glad you liked it though.

rocky5mew March 8 2009, 15:39:56 UTC

This is purely amazing, you do realize that, right?

Yo. danyellaskyler March 14 2009, 17:10:56 UTC

I like to think it is. But it's always nice to hear from someone else.