THE LITTLE PRINCE

[_alicesprings]

Title: The Little Prince
Written By: kjsilopanna
Timeline: Post 5.13
Rating: R (For language mostly…lame, I know, but I can’t write porn. Sorry.)
Summary: Justin has angst. Brian makes lame innuendos. Craziness ensues.
Author Notes: It helps to have a general knowledge of the original The Little Prince to appreciate this, but it’s not really necessary. Go

Comments

[etharei]

It doesn’t happen, and after an hour of counting Teds, he gets up and puts on a pot of coffee.

*gigglesnort* It's such a Brian statement that I find it adorable that it's referring to Justin :-) Guess that's to be expected if you've got Brian Kinney as your guide towards being the Best Homosexual.

I absolutely love the humor mixed with slight angst and told in a clear, concise narrative. The style is really familiar and so in-character; I know I've come across its like before, so that should narrow down the field of possible authors. Whoever it is, this is highly enjoyable and very well-written. Great job!

[kjsilopanna]

Haha, oh, counting Teds. I wanted Justin to be counting SOMETHING to try and sleep, and I was like "what's the most boring possible thing to count?" My inner Brian rolled his eyes and said that it was Ted, of course!

I'm thrilled that you liked the fic-ness! *huggles*

[burkesl17]

"....you don’t need to prove your undying love with real estate. You know that, right?"

Awsome witty line. I liked this story a lot it had depth, good characterisation and the descriptions of New York were great, I felt really 'there'.

[kjsilopanna]

Tee hee! I loved writing that line, too.

I'm glad you enjoyed the fic. *huggles*

[faith_27]

Beautiful written: Justin seemed so lost somehow, and Brian was kind of 'cute' during their family conversation... great work! Thanks:-)

[kjsilopanna]

Thank you soooooooo much!

[seamonkeyz27]

Yay! I feel bad for Justin though that his daddy wouldnt talk to him-- but at least he has family with Brian! Nice story!

[kjsilopanna]

The idea of what makes a family really appealed to me when I was brainstorming for this fic, so I'm glad it went over well. Thank you so much for reading!

[severina2001]

I really enjoyed that this contained lengthy, intelligent dialogue that didn't sound forced or unreal -- it sounded very much like S5 Justin. IMO the beginning was a little too long and disconnected from the rest of the fic, but once we got to Justin in NYC the pace picked up and everything flowed beautifully.

[kjsilopanna]

First off, thank you for reading and commenting. I agree about the length of the first section--I had grand plans to flesh out Brian's storyline; in fact, when I first started writing it? It was totally all about Brian, and Justin was merely in the periphery. As I started weaving the B/J storylines together, however, it all started to sound contrived and I got frustrated and hacked off a significant chunks of Brian's scenes before the deadline. I pumped up the Justin storyline because the issues I was coming up with for him seemed more universal, not to mention I wasn't blanking as much when it came time to actually sit at my laptop every morning.

...This is what I get for not using a beta. =S