THE LITTLE PRINCE

[_alicesprings]

Title: The Little Prince
Written By: kjsilopanna
Timeline: Post 5.13
Rating: R (For language mostly…lame, I know, but I can’t write porn. Sorry.)
Summary: Justin has angst. Brian makes lame innuendos. Craziness ensues.
Author Notes: It helps to have a general knowledge of the original The Little Prince to appreciate this, but it’s not really necessary. Go

Comments

OKay...here is another keeper

[callie89]

Loved the snark.....the Tony Danza line is priceless. And one of the best Justin comeback lines. "....you don’t need to prove your undying love with real estate. You know that, right?"

LOL....

This was wonderful filled with a nice mix of different and expressed emotions.

Nice Job.

;-)

Re: OKay...here is another keeper

[kjsilopanna]

Thank you so much! The snark is very important, hee hee. Can you imagine B/J without it? =P

[shadownyc]

I really liked this. I thought it was a good combination of good B/J dialogue (and good Deb & Daphne dialogue for that matter), banter included coupled with angst that B/J were able to deal with together.

[kjsilopanna]

Thank you so much! I was trying to build up on my mad dialogue skillz for this one since my last fic contained hardly any dialgue at all. I'm thrilled that you liked it. =)

[vlredreign]

This is such an apt description of Justin, circa S5:

Justin thinks that Debbie might be on to something: every time he opens his eyes, Justin sees what he thinks he should have. His eyes look out on the world and they see conventional families, conventional lives-and it all looks so appealing. Not because those things are what’s best for him, but because they’re socially accepted and comfortable-looking, at least from his outsider’s perspective. He’s made a lot of decisions lately with eyes wide open.

Justin closes his eyes and tries to see what really matters.

Great story.

[kjsilopanna]

Thank you! I wanted to create a S5 Justin that doesn't make the fandom mad, hee hee. I'm thrilled that you liked it!

[hjohnson1]

I really enjoyed this. The conversations were well written and I loved how Debbie brought the whole thing together for Justin. And the happy ending was of course perfect.

[kjsilopanna]

Thank you sooo much!

[court1429]

Well, I've read about a dozen so far and I have author-guesses on 3. This one goes in the mystery column. Regardless, I very, very much enjoyed the read.

counting Teds I inhaled water when I read that. lol

I hate to admit I've never read "Le Petit Prince" so I took your advice and read the summary in Wikipedia. I see how you used it as your inspiration, but not knowing the story doesn't take anything away from the enjoyment of reading your fic.

[kjsilopanna]

Well, I've read about a dozen so far and I have author-guesses on 3. This one goes in the mystery column.

Yeah, I get the feeling that I'm more well known for lurking and randomly commenting in this fandom than anything else, haha.

I see how you used it as your inspiration, but not knowing the story doesn't take anything away from the enjoyment of reading your fic.

Awesome! Thank you sooooo much for commenting.