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RESOLUTION

Sep 01, 2006 22:47

Title: Resolution
Written By: silent_seas
Timeline: Starts the night before Justin’s departure for NYC and ends about 18 months later.
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: A little angst, but it gets better.
Summary: Justin makes an unusual work of art that changes his relationship with Brian.
Author Notes: My first fic of any kind. I apologize if it sucks.

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Comments 30

seanmegansean September 2 2006, 17:28:05 UTC

Loved it. Especially the return to the post cancer situation - Brian did indeed learn a lot from his past and I think it is dead on that he thinks back to that pivotal moment here.

Thanks a lot for writing :D

callie89 September 2 2006, 19:43:35 UTC

Subconsciously, he knows that despite their years together, a part of Justin will always remain free and unpredictable-entirely separate from Brian-and this is why Brian will never lose interest.

What a STATEMENT!!! What TRUTH!!! I truly enjoyed this.

;-)

ladooshka September 2 2006, 19:45:27 UTC

I always liked to read about Justin's paintings! It's amazing how detailed you describe what he might create, it's like you really can see the Brian's portrait in front of you on a wall! Very good story! Unbelievable that it's your first fic! Congratulation! You've done great!

sixpackokittens September 3 2006, 00:57:42 UTC

agree with all previous comments. amazing first fic! please write more.

kaiponohea September 3 2006, 01:47:29 UTC

Well. If this is your first fic, you absolutely MUST write more. This is excellent!

Brian wants to fuck Justin for hours. He hates how disappointment bends Justin’s posture, how Justin’s effort to hold back all the conflicting thoughts makes his features settle into that grimly inexpressive mask. Brian wants him to lose awareness of anything but the sensations, the reverence, that Brian offers, and for him to come back to reality knowing all the things Brian isn’t sure how to explain. This has worked in the past, but he suspects it won’t now. Brian isn’t sure he can do enough for Justin to make this fucked up situation right again, and that scares Brian more than it makes him angry.

One of many lovely bits here. A lot of feeling conveyed, a lot of understanding.... Well done!