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IN MY ROOM

Sep 01, 2006 22:34

Title: In My Room
Written By: vlredreign
Timeline: Season 1, Episode 118
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Language
Summary: Sometimes, you gotta go for it. Justin's POV.

( In My Room )

Comments 31

etharei September 2 2006, 05:36:58 UTC

Beautiful imagery; I think you've captured Justin's voice in 118 really well, and the thoughts going through his mind as he contemplates the various levels of conflict with his parents. I love that end scene where he's sketching, it's a wonderful example of a story being communicated without any need for dialogue. Very insightful and in-character, good work!

vlredreign September 11 2006, 03:37:32 UTC

Thank you! I really liked S1 Justin. For every brat minute, there was that self-possessed adult that came through from time to time.

xie_xie_xie September 2 2006, 06:34:06 UTC

You’ll see blue if I want you to.

This sums Justin up SO well! Beautiful!

vlredreign September 11 2006, 03:38:17 UTC

Thank you, and thanks for the beta! *hugs*

paddies September 3 2006, 11:58:43 UTC

Awww...lovely! :-)

vlredreign September 11 2006, 03:38:47 UTC

Thanks, glad you liked!

court1429 September 3 2006, 17:36:05 UTC

I really appreciate writers who make me see the scenes they're writing and you did this beatifully.

It’s blue. Denim blue. I can make it look blue with just my pencil. You’ll see blue if I want you to. And I do.

I smile.

I am Justin Taylor, and I am an artist. It’s what I am. It’s who I am.

perfect. :) Thank you!

vlredreign September 11 2006, 03:40:33 UTC

Thanks, Court! :)

rosengirl September 3 2006, 23:56:44 UTC

Great Justin voice going on here :)