Happy Slapped by Alaskan Bleakness.

[dark_magic_rose]

I wrote a lot last night and today. I am really good about setting the plot, but am horrible with filler dialogue. I'm very frustrated and can't tell which is filler and which is necessary. It all seems filler to me. I can understand why writers have proofreaders. Constructive criticism is soo important. I definitely would like it

Comments

[mos_stef]

I want to respond to this post but it's 2:45 am and I should be writing an essay and I don't know what to say, so here's a picture of a giant bunny:

[dark_magic_rose]

awwww! he's my dream come true! I either want to fall asleep on him or a panda.

[mos_stef]

Aww, yeah! :D There's an ad on the subway for a mascara that says something like "No more panda eyes!", and Joey asked me what panda eyes are since he thought it was a cute thing. For some reason a few days later I mentioned something about panda mouth, and he decided that that's when you fall asleep with a piece of bamboo sticking out of your mouth.

Okay, this is kind of incomprehensible, but I think it's cute. :)

[dark_magic_rose]

It's adorable! Panda eyes mean when you give someone the puppy dog eyes, but cuter because they are panda eyes. Pandas are my favorite aminals. <3 lol. Tell Joey that he is absolutely right about a panda mouth.

How did your essay go?

[__losing__you__]

I'm glad you're still writing :)

[dark_magic_rose]

Me too. It's a daily occurrence now.