Love that Comes and Goes with the Tide

[darkangel_01]

Quickly, time was slipping through his fingers as he let the sand grains fall. There was no greatness in thoes sand grains now. They had served their purpose in the past as something of the living, and had died and deteriorated and crumbled into the fine sediments he now felt fall through the cracks. Slowly, but not reluctantly, his feet arched

Comments

[justsomefool]

You're a wonderful writer.

[darkangel_01]

Thanks Peter, that means a lot to me, i've been very depressed lately and this is the first peice of actual writing i've produced in a long time, I was very worried that the gift of words had forsaken me and that the quality of whatever i vomit up has gone horribly down. Thanks so much, it means a lot to me that other people see something beautiful in what I write.

- Molly

[rabbitofnight]

It is good to see you writing again. It's been a while. The piece itself is well written, I knew that because of how it struck me, but it could just be the times. I hope you keep it up.