Inanis - Short Drabble

Jun 21, 2005 22:50


Title: Inanis
Pairing: Harry/Draco
Warning: Character Death
Summary:“I can feel them coming, I’m scared.”
Words: 849

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xpretty_pistol June 23 2005, 02:45:18 UTC
I cried. oh lord. I cried buckets..
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silentlytold June 23 2005, 02:56:37 UTC
oh dear, I hope you were in the mood :S I don't know what came over me when I wrote this. I just woke up around 3 in the morning and started writing, it just came to me. Maybe I was dreaming something similar before that.. hmm, Anyways thanks for reading.

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silentlytold June 23 2005, 02:58:03 UTC
PS: This is DarkChocolate_, just with my 'normal' LJ. :grin: sorry!

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lavender_rose June 24 2005, 01:01:24 UTC
That was so heartbreaking. I wasn't sure what age they were, I was imagining older. It made me feel a little better to think Harry and Draco had been together a long time. Great fic!

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darkchocolate_ June 25 2005, 02:16:31 UTC
yeah, in my imagination they're about 25... Thank you thank you!

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feministfangirl July 5 2005, 06:10:37 UTC
Beautiful. But so very sad. It made me cry... so you should be happy with that, lol!

My favourite parts:

“You know how you always tell me you love me? I just realized that I’ve only told you that I love you twice. I just want you to know, that it never changed.”

Maybe if I hold him close enough I will trap his soul as well. He can’t leave me. I am scared without him too. I am scared of the loneliness I will feel. Already I feel like I’m missing a limb. “I love you, stay with me. I love you, I love you, I love you.” To be honest I don’t remember how many times I’ve said ‘I love you’.

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