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iupdarlin June 18 2010, 17:22:30 UTC
What's the problem?!?! Why can't I figure out the problem?!?! Haha.
Aiba was really cute here, having little insecurity issues :3

Can't wait for more!!

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darkilk June 19 2010, 07:41:35 UTC
Lol. There have been hints along the way, but it'll also be clearer in the next part. As for Aiba, wanted the lovable part of his character, but didn't want him to come across as - too - silly.

Glad you're looking forward to the next part cos I'm jived about writing it too. :)

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iqachipmunk June 18 2010, 18:03:25 UTC
love nino for trying to help jun and sho...

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darkilk June 19 2010, 07:43:47 UTC
Lol. We know they all love one another n if it's something they figure they can help improve the situation,I figure they'd want in.

Love you for commenting too. :)

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anya131986 June 18 2010, 21:13:14 UTC
thank you!I'm so curious ^^

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darkilk June 19 2010, 07:46:20 UTC
Lol. Glad I piqued your curiosity. Now if I can just get the next part out before the end of next week. No promises but definitely trying cos RL's gonna be a b***h after that.

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fancyann1974 June 19 2010, 01:04:48 UTC
got to love aiba and his way of thinking
lol...they just firgured out what is wrong
hope sho and jun can work this out
great update
thank you for sharing

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darkilk June 19 2010, 07:51:49 UTC
Lol. Don't think that Aiba was really thinking that much when talking w Jun, but his simple philosophy is just so apt sometimes, I find.

N now that batman n robin have -somewhat - figured it out, what might they do?

Felt guilty that took so long to update, but this was a hard part to put together. Thanks for reading n commenting. :)

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cookie_coffee June 19 2010, 01:21:11 UTC
*cheers* now that nino and aiba-chan are here to try to save the day, hopefully things will work out! Thanks so much for such a long update, can't wait to read the next chapter! :)

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darkilk June 19 2010, 07:57:41 UTC
Worried initially that it would be jarring that it was neither sho's nor jun's perspectives, but I kinda preferred the flow this way. As for resolutions, things should get a little better in the next part and yes, Jun's voice shall return.

Glad you're looking forward to the next part, cos I'm looking fwd to writing it too. :) :)

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