I Want Everything Too Much... pt II

May 16, 2010 01:53

Rachel sat at the bar with her back to the stage, (because one should never let physical appearance cloud the judgment of vocal talent) cosmopolitan in one hand and a black sharpie in the other. Jesse was right beside her, elbows on the bar and beer in hand, facing the stage.

Rachel cringed and could instantly feel the rage boiling as the man at the ( Read more... )

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acidic_ram3n May 16 2010, 08:27:48 UTC
DDDDDDD: It can't end there! AH! Just..... I'm so ridiculously incoherent here, but I can't stress enough how large my need is for more of this fic! Right now! UGH!

That being said, and I'm trying my hardest to maintain coherency here and not slip back into my "DDDDDDDD:"ing while I continue. I adored this chapter. Especially how you drifted from the story to the backstory. IT'S LIKE TWO STORIES IN ONE! (I apologize, caps were uncalled for.)

Seriously though, my heart broke from that note. I was not expecting that in the slightest. Rachel really needs to run after her... Right now. Jeez.

haha, okay, ending this long ramble of nothing now. Literally cannot wait for the next chapter. :D

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darklashes03 May 16 2010, 13:45:06 UTC
Haha, I'm sorry I had to end it somewhere:)
And I'm so glad you liked the flashbacks, because I love writing them and i wasn't so sure if they would work...so that makes me smile:) (I always enjoy an uncalled for caps sentence, they keep you on your toes!)
Thank you so much for reading and commenting, seriously rambling comments are so my favorite kind:)
...and I guess I'll start writing the next chapter...or you know at least start thinking about what's going to happen:)

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ians_grace47 May 16 2010, 09:17:04 UTC
Awww Drizzle!! I'm intrigued. I love the fact that Touch Me is the only song that Drizzle can sleep to lol. I'm still depressed...but have some hope you will fix this *still glaring*

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darklashes03 May 16 2010, 13:37:00 UTC
I promise (hand to God) that I will most definitely fix the Faberry:)
Thank you so much for reading<3

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hostile_666 May 16 2010, 10:51:20 UTC
Wow :O
I so did not expect that :')
Awsome awsome awsome ^^
Love it :D

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darklashes03 May 16 2010, 13:35:39 UTC
Thank you so much!!
<3

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perpetualblyss May 16 2010, 12:41:43 UTC
Wow unexpected twist. I thought it would be Quinn. Great stuff though.

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darklashes03 May 16 2010, 13:35:19 UTC
Thanks so much...
yeah Quinn's definitely going to make an appearance though<3

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apac114 May 16 2010, 16:09:25 UTC
BRB dying.

K. I'm back.

Goodness ... this is GOOD!!!! No ... it's AMAZING!

It’s still my favorite inappropriate lullaby,

Drizzle.
Awww.

Needz moar.

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darklashes03 May 22 2010, 19:35:30 UTC
thanks so much<3

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