Rachel sat at the bar with her back to the stage, (because one should never let physical appearance cloud the judgment of vocal talent) cosmopolitan in one hand and a black sharpie in the other. Jesse was right beside her, elbows on the bar and beer in hand, facing the stage.
Rachel cringed and could instantly feel the rage boiling as the man at the
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That being said, and I'm trying my hardest to maintain coherency here and not slip back into my "DDDDDDDD:"ing while I continue. I adored this chapter. Especially how you drifted from the story to the backstory. IT'S LIKE TWO STORIES IN ONE! (I apologize, caps were uncalled for.)
Seriously though, my heart broke from that note. I was not expecting that in the slightest. Rachel really needs to run after her... Right now. Jeez.
haha, okay, ending this long ramble of nothing now. Literally cannot wait for the next chapter. :D
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And I'm so glad you liked the flashbacks, because I love writing them and i wasn't so sure if they would work...so that makes me smile:) (I always enjoy an uncalled for caps sentence, they keep you on your toes!)
Thank you so much for reading and commenting, seriously rambling comments are so my favorite kind:)
...and I guess I'll start writing the next chapter...or you know at least start thinking about what's going to happen:)
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Thank you so much for reading<3
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I so did not expect that :')
Awsome awsome awsome ^^
Love it :D
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<3
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yeah Quinn's definitely going to make an appearance though<3
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K. I'm back.
Goodness ... this is GOOD!!!! No ... it's AMAZING!
It’s still my favorite inappropriate lullaby,
Drizzle.
Awww.
Needz moar.
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