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darthdolly

Luminous Dust 7/16

Nov 21, 2005 17:19

Title: Luminous Dust
Author: Dolly (darthdolly)
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Anakin/Obi-Wan
Timeframe: post RotS AU
Summary: coming soon. ^^;;
Spoilers: possibly for RotS
Warnings: Contains slash and mentions of mature themes, but nothing explicit.
Notes: This is the sequel to my story What Comes of It, which can be found HERE. So you'll probably want to ( Read more... )

luminous dust

Comments 18

avlyn_naturae November 24 2005, 02:00:39 UTC

And again you leave it where I'm just begging for more. You're an idiot, Anakin, seriously, and a bit of a coward too. *rolls eyes* Come on, more.

darthdolly November 26 2005, 01:27:23 UTC

Coming right up! Chapter 8 will be posted in a few minutes. And then, finally, some of the actual PLOT will start! lol. Thanks for reading!

anakin415 November 24 2005, 09:41:42 UTC

first off hats off to helga and her "shag the Obi" lol damn right take him he wants you its done. lol

Secondly I think you have serious nailed the Anakin character. Ever so simple yet painfully complex. Why I have and always will love him. Keep it coming you are doing well. Looking forward to much more when you can.

darthdolly November 26 2005, 01:29:30 UTC

See my reply to helga for some instant gratification, lol.

And I'm really glad you think Anakin is in character! Like you said, he seems so simple, yet his thought process is so hard to nail. Thanks for reading!

ariespureblood November 24 2005, 20:40:04 UTC

Anakin is a mystery to me here. Can't wait to here more about the history between obi-wan and him. I heard this line and was completely interested lol cause i need to know:
He had kidnapped, demeaned, and raped Obi-Wan, and it certainly wouldn't do for Anakin to kiss him or pull him into an embrace, like he wanted to. No matter what he felt, Anakin had to remember that he could not have Obi-Wan; not like he wanted to.
But other than that I <3 this fic and will be a loyal reader of yor stuff lol!!

darthdolly November 26 2005, 01:34:33 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you're liking it! Nice to have you as a reader. :)

Psst . . .

What Comes of It

Read that, and all shall be explained. ;) As I mentioned in the (teeny, easily skimmed over) header, Luminous Dust is actually a sequel to the story linked above.

avari_maethor November 26 2005, 02:52:19 UTC

I wished I could have known what Anakin and Obi said to each other.

Well... now I have two things to worry about.

1. The guards pulling something on Obi
2. Anakin getting drunk, making a move on Padme and Obi walking in...

Or something to that extent.

Happy belated Thanksgiving!