Part Thirteen

[datsun99]

Sorry for the delay guys; I felt a short update now might be better than a long one after another week, so I wrote half the chapter I planned out this evening, et voila. I hope you enjoy it; let me know. I've never really written a scene like this before, so I'd appreciate any crit or feedback.

House was far too close, scrutinising him, reaching out

Comments

[nianeyna]

Nooooooooooooooooooooooo.

I'm sorry. I can't comment, because you have turned my brain into A PILE OF PATHETICALLY QUIVERING GLOP.

Agh, agh, what did Wilson say?

[datsun99]

Oops! Sorry about the glop >:) All will be revealed in time, thanks for commenting!

[raquel_el_pillo]

Break the trend? No way. More than glad to comment on a great story if that'll keep it alive. :) As always, the writing's wonderful, especially in the beginning scene where Wilson's still in that first phase of reeling from the room, where everything feels so weird and disjointed... Yeah, you did a better job describing it there than I can here. Thanks for another great chapter.

It just pulled at me when Wilson didn't let House touch him and comfort him. Doesn't he know how rare that is? He is distressed, though; I'll give him the benefit of the doubt... :) Great job.

[datsun99]

Thanks very much! glad you enjoyed the chapter; never really written a 'fight' scene before so am pleased it came off ok. Will be updating soon :)

[cb_eaglemaniac]

Wooww, I'm loving this story more and more. I found it a week or two ago and now I'm hanging on waiting for every update. Your writing is fantastic, and my heart hurts for poor Wilson (and House too, of course!). *hugs them*

I can't wait until your next update!

[datsun99]

Thanks you for commenting! will be updating soon I hope, and trying to fix the mess I left h&w in >:)

Awww!

[juliedeeley]

Gee! I hope they sort that out. :(

Re: Awww!

[datsun99]

haha, me too. it was kind of a hard situation to write actually, i hate it when people fight! thanks for commenting :)

[angelcat2865]

Great update, but painful to read. Poor House and Wilson. Would love to know what Wilson said to House to hurt him so.

[datsun99]

it was kind of painful to write as well, tbh, i hate fights! thanks for commenting, will update soon :)