Part Thirteen

[datsun99]

Sorry for the delay guys; I felt a short update now might be better than a long one after another week, so I wrote half the chapter I planned out this evening, et voila. I hope you enjoy it; let me know. I've never really written a scene like this before, so I'd appreciate any crit or feedback.

House was far too close, scrutinising him, reaching out

Comments

[narcoleptic_ll]

A wonderful chapter again. My heart raced through the last bit, Wilson finding out like that sucks big time for him. And such a wonderful characterization, you’re such a great writer!

Please don't keep us waiting for too long.

[datsun99]

will be updating a.s.a.p. The current situation does indeed suck, I am more evil than I realised. Thanks for commenting

Re: Ok!

[datsun99]

haha, indeed. Hopefully in the next couple of days :)

[datsun99]

Welcome back from your LJ break! Am glad you like the story! Will be updating soon; the drool thing is not necessary, but cookies are always welcome ! >:)

[_strange_music_]

Really enjoying the story so far. Thank you for the short update! I was and still am eagerly following your story. Looking forward to the next update.

[datsun99]

Thanks very much, am glad you like the story! :) Just posted the newest part, hope you like it!