Part Thirteen

[datsun99]

Sorry for the delay guys; I felt a short update now might be better than a long one after another week, so I wrote half the chapter I planned out this evening, et voila. I hope you enjoy it; let me know. I've never really written a scene like this before, so I'd appreciate any crit or feedback.

House was far too close, scrutinising him, reaching out

Comments

[anonymous]

This was so awesome! You have once again made my night. Please update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm not sure I care what Wilson said to House. House still shouldn't have left! I'm actually kind of mad at House right now. Poor Wilson! hehe...see how much you have me hooked?

[datsun99]

Thanks very much! Will be updating soon :)

[hw221]

Oh my goodness. I think I just got my daily recommended dose of angst for today. Brilliant characterization, and it made me hurt (but in a good way). Can't wait for more.

[datsun99]

glad I could provide you with your RDA! Thanks for commenting, will be updating soon to try and salvage the situation :)

[ace_of_spades6]

You better get the next part up tomorrow because oh my god...this was amazing, but god was it pulling at my heartstrings. This was written VERY well, I cannot wait until the next chapter

[datsun99]

thanks very much! Recent delays between chapters have been because I recently got a second job (ugh) so am a bit frantic for time at the moment, but will be updating soon :)

[macropterous]

Arrrrgh! The tension and anger in those scenes is so strong, but still believable. It just tears at me to read it. Wow. Wow.
Just KEEP GOING.

[datsun99]

:) Will do! Updating soon I hope, thanks for commenting!

[kodo_kd]

Keep writing! D:

[datsun99]

:) updating soon. Glad you are enjoying the story