Part Thirteen

[datsun99]

Sorry for the delay guys; I felt a short update now might be better than a long one after another week, so I wrote half the chapter I planned out this evening, et voila. I hope you enjoy it; let me know. I've never really written a scene like this before, so I'd appreciate any crit or feedback.

House was far too close, scrutinising him, reaching out

Comments

[birdstrike]

Ouch... That hurt to read. I'm so sorry for the poor guys T.T

IT'S ALL CUDDYS FAULT!!! EVIL CUDDY OF DOOM!!!

Love the way you write. So very IC, it made me see the whole scene in front of my eyes, as if it happened on the show. You are made of awesome! :D

[datsun99]

ah, Evil Cuddy will be appearing in the next chapter, possibly not in such an evil capacity >:) Thanks for commenting!

[hwshipper]

I want to know more I want to know more I want to know more... Please!

[datsun99]

:) Will be updating soon, thank you for commenting!

[lhoma320]

I love the way you set this whole situation up. I feel so badly for the both of them and I'm really upset with the both of them. But, I'm even more upset with House. He sounds like my husband always grabbing for the keys and bolting. I love the way he says "I told them not to call here". Surely Wilson, of all people, has to understand the situation House is in. He's just not thinking because he's so out of it. To be honest, it is so House to mess with him too. I can see Wilson's point

[datsun99]

Thanks very much! Am glad you are enjoying the story and that the fight came off realistically! I've kind of thrown both of them into a lose/lose situation where it's not exactly anyone's fault *is evil* so I guess they were both pretty imperfect in this chapter! Oh well, will update soon and try and repair the damage :)

[xgraciela]

Sorry for not commenting on the previous one. I just had no time..
I'm still loving this, but this part was hard to read..

Oh Wilson.. *headpalm* Can I tell him that House actually doesn't want to work on that bastard? Please, he needs to know!

*hugs House and Wilson - preferably together*

Hope to see more soon :)

[datsun99]

will be updating soon :) the whole situation is now kind of a *headpalm* situation! Oops.

[anonymous]

I don't comment much, due to being a lurker. I love this fic.

[datsun99]

Thanks for delurking and commenting :) Glad you like the story