[fic] Watchmen; Like Water; Dan/Ror

Dec 21, 2009 11:00

Title: Like Water
Rating: PG
Pairing: Dan/Rorschach
Warnings: None
Summary: Dan does his best to deny his feelings. It doesn't work out very well.
Written as a Secret Santa gift for lukadron !
There are certain things Dan doesn't think about. )

watchmen, dan/rorschach, fic

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quietprofanity December 21 2009, 17:11:00 UTC
Awww, that was so sweet and I loved the H/C. I have a weakness for Rorschach making fumbling romantic gestures so I loved the trenchcoat and him holding his hat in his hand and ... yeah, good stuff. The telephone signal was a nice little detail, as well. Great work, daylily.

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daylilymoon December 22 2009, 02:06:13 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you likes Rorschach's little gestures. :)

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mustinvestigate December 21 2009, 23:08:23 UTC
Awww...this is exactly what I needed after a day like today. This was so sweet without being syrupy - I love their adorable best-buddies vibe and that Dan's twigged on to Rorschach basing his version of a good man on the only examples he ever had.

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daylilymoon December 22 2009, 02:07:04 UTC
Aw, thanks! :D I worry about crossing the sweet/syrupy line so it's good to hear this is okay.

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sandoz_iscariot December 22 2009, 02:20:11 UTC
Wonderful! Dan drinking out of Rorschach's hand is one of those scenes that is so sweet and perfectly sensual.

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daylilymoon December 22 2009, 16:37:35 UTC
Thanks sandoz :)

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jackiemei December 22 2009, 04:57:52 UTC
Wonderful! I love the notion of Rorschach imitating old movies when it comes to romance. It fits with his whole persona of belonging in a different era. I liked all the details about Dan too. And I agree that this was sweet without getting too fluffy for a NO/Ror fic. Nice work!

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daylilymoon December 22 2009, 16:34:50 UTC
Thank you very much! Yeah, I do love how Rorschach can be so old-fashioned and out of place sometimes.

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♥_♥ lukadron December 22 2009, 18:10:43 UTC
When I saw who was my secret Santa I squeed. It made me so happy ;c;
This was perfect in all ways. The pacing was great, and the many details just made this one an incredible, sensible read that touched the heart with just enough force :D
Rorschach removing his hat and then putting it on <3
Being a hopeless romantic like in the old movies and how his hat sat a little askew when he tried to get them out of the storehouse. Omg. So many wonderful little things that I can't even being to name. How you write dialogues is a pleasure to read, so well timed and in character. The descriptions, gnah! This is more than I could have hoped for from this Secret Santa Exchange. Thank you so, so much! I loved it from beginning to end. You definitively made my Christmas :3

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Re: ♥_♥ daylilymoon December 22 2009, 19:22:47 UTC
Awww, thank you so much! I'm very, very glad to hear you liked it ♥ Merry Christmas!

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