Sense

Apr 29, 2009 16:25


Sense [[keeps giving me reasons to love you]]
Changmin//Yoochun ; Yoochun//Junsu
PG-13 ; Angst/Romance ; Band!verse
9, 855 words
Changmin was a rational man... then he met Yoochun
For my super wonderful Read more... )

length: oneshot, p: yoochun/junsu, p: yoochun/changmin, centric: changmin

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egoisticfreak April 30 2009, 00:40:34 UTC
SPOT! ahahaha...

YOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMIIIIIIINNNNN!!!!

I wonder when will you write a JaeSu!??? ahahaha...XD

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daynah_bo April 30 2009, 00:47:53 UTC
yes, spot is yours, bb! i told you i wrote yoomin ;)

(jaesu... eventually, be patient xD) ♥

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yumified_dbsk April 30 2009, 00:50:33 UTC
:') Beautiful!

I'm lost for words. <3

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daynah_bo April 30 2009, 01:28:13 UTC
aww, thank you, honey! *hugs* means a lot to me - happy you enjoyed ♥

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fragiledays April 30 2009, 01:08:25 UTC
Oh wow.

Let me tell you, first and foremost, that I was holding my breath and anxious throughout the whole thing, omg. It was suspenseful in such as way that I couldn't see whether Chun would love Min back, how would the members react, or whether Chun would get better when he was sick, or if he'd turn to Su, or if Su would cut in, the whole thing really felt very insecure...?

I was rooting for Min all the while though! This is really long, and it's really not till the end that I know that Chun's happy with Min, and I felt like, ~whoosh~ it was really a sigh of relief.

I really love how this fic was able to affect me like that. Lol, my heart was so heavy reading it, but at the ending, I feel so relieved haha.

“So does Junsu.”

“I never noticed,” Yoochun bites back

THAT LINE MADE ME SO HAPPY.

I also really love how Changmin seems to change towards the end, less calculative, less cautious, and more in love, it's really awesome.

♥♥♥♥♥

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daynah_bo April 30 2009, 01:36:38 UTC
aww, what a lovely comment ♥ *glomps* yes, I'm very fond of writing things this way (but I don't do it enough ;__;) I wanted an evolution, and I hope that I pulled that off :)

Mmhmm, Yoochun needed time, and at the end, I think, that what they have is true love. Junsu is still part of his heart, but now he has Changmin and... well, you know the rest ;)

I'M HAPPY THAT I MADE YOU HAPPY xDDD

Changmin's in love ♥

Thank you for your sweet words and lovely comment! *hugs* ♥♥♥♥♥

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namelesshachi April 30 2009, 01:52:47 UTC
this was so beautiful!
haha im not so sure what to say!
n___n i just loved it!
aaah! i missed my beautiful yoomin! *havent read them in a while*

you're awesome for writing this!

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daynah_bo April 30 2009, 01:57:41 UTC
aw thank you ♥ *hugs* i tried my best and i'm glad that you like it :D

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mumbles April 30 2009, 02:12:45 UTC
You've stolen my heart with YooMin! <3 <3
I just love the way you evolve this pairing from being awkward to a couple even though there was some YooSu. ;____;
You should write more YooMin bb! xD

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daynah_bo April 30 2009, 02:44:19 UTC
aww ♥ well, i promise to take care of your heart while in my possession :)
oh, bb, thank you thank you thank you! *hugs* i promise to write more yoomin in the future
♥♥♥
thanks again!

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