Sense

[daynah_bo]

Sense [[keeps giving me reasons to love you]]
Changmin//Yoochun ; Yoochun//Junsu
PG-13 ; Angst/Romance ; Band!verse
9, 855 words
Changmin was a rational man... then he met Yoochun
For my super wonderful

Comments

[miaka20]

*_* Oh dear... I haven't read YooMin for aaaaaaaages... I almost forgot about them... but you did justice to the pairing...so much! I don't know what to say. I mean, even if they are not my otp, you wrote this in such a beautiful and heartbreaking way, that made me speechless, really. I love your description of them and their feelings, love the way you portrayed Min at the begining, all the suffering and Yoochun's breakdown... everything was really perfect, AND you made me root all the way for Min *dodges from other otp's bricks*.

There's nothing else I can say bb, just: yes, you should write yoomin again ^^
hugs

[daynah_bo]

haha! how can you forget something so cute? kidding, kidding. aww *blushes* thank you, this is my first attempt (due to a request) and it just kind of... flowed right out of me. *shields you from bricks* :) your comment flatters me so much; i tried, and i am happy that you liked the outcome! *hugs*

definitely will consider writing yoomin again, bb! ♥

[hmtermulo]

my heart aches for this. as much as i love yoomin, not-so-unrequited yoosu love really breaks me. even if chun did say i love you in the end and yoomin has their happy ending..i still have that feeling of sadness for yoosu. my heart really does feel heavy.

i love this fic though. it made me feel all sorts of emotions. angst is angst. but good angst. and i still feel bad....*sniff*

*hugs you*

[daynah_bo]

aww *hugs you* i'm sorry for making your heart ache. and yes, chun did say i love you, but there's always going to be that love he has for junsu - which will make it hard at times... actually, rereading this, i don't really know who i hurt for the most. changmin, yoochun or junsu... :(

*wipes your eyes* maybe next time i write yoomin, i'll write fluffy...? maybe? xD

thank you, honey! ♥

[hmtermulo]

maybe. and no more love triangles. well, not really. you know what i mean XD

i guess you hurt all three of them. you mean woman. (kidding! :P)

[aniprincess_13]

SPOT no matter how late it is -_-

It's loooooooon me loves.. I'm halfway done... But I have to stop at times... heart is clenching >.

[aniprincess_13]

*sniffles*

That is just too beautiful... The hurt, the pain, the love... all bored down to my chest.. I wanna cry T_T

I still sense the YooSu bias lmao But no matter.. you're still one of my fave writers.. no matter what pair you write =)

JaeHo!!!

Oddly enough... the part where they were all going to separate hurt more than the YooMinSu love triangle... Although I seriously wanted to huggle Min.. and just pat Junsu on the back. I understand his position.. we have the same religion... I can't believe how hard it must have been for him...

I love this and you.. I really do =)

[daynah_bo]

awww *hugs* no tears, bb, i don't want you to cry! aww *hugs you* ♥

haha! well, it's hard to get rid of the bias so quickly - i have been writing them since at least sept.-oct. xP awww~ thank you, honey! i enjoy your writings, too :) i'm thinking about testing out a few other pairings (jaesu, jaechun, minsu, jaemin, homin, hosu... so on xD)

JaeHo ftw!

yes, i did enjoy writing the love triangle, but the ot5-breakup was one of my fave scenes. i wanted to show them as a family despite the... heartache going on...

aw, i love you&your fics, too, bb! ♥

[aniprincess_13]

YunChun!!!!!!! but JaeHo FTW!!

XD That would be awesome bb!!! *cheers you on*

And biases are okay.. I have a hard time not letting it show in my fics :p (They HAVE to be best friends or enemies. They just HAVE to have a relationship XD)

[toshi19]

wait dear.. my PC is somehow broken at the moment i need to go to this internet shop to finish my thesis... i will read this when my PC is already fix ok dear?? ^_~

[daynah_bo]

i will wait then, bb :) no worries, hope your computer gets fixed soon! <3

[toshi19]

aw dear, DISBAND!!! i really dread that they X_x

anyway this is good dear... i like how you write your Minne.. ahahehehe... i am a YooSu fan (*and you are too i am sure of it my dear*) so i am a bit heartbroken with this but hey i love the story dear..

“Wherever you want us to be…” nice line over there,,,

and a lil bit of YunJae (*i really hope they end up together*) (*run for my dear life*)

ahahahah... more from your dear.. TNX!!! ^_~

[daynah_bo]

yes, we all dread that day... :(

oh, yes, i am a huge yoosu fan as well, but i'm very happy you enjoyed the story anyway :) and of course, yunjae had to have their... moments :D couldn't write the story without them xP

thank you, dear! *hugs*

[anonymous]

Is it bad that I clung on to the teeny bit of Yoosu throughout the story? cries, i'm hopeless.

but yes, beautiful, as always. the building up of emotions. lovely. ♥

D;

[auchampselysee]

sorry about the fail!anonymous posting.

[daynah_bo]

it's okay, bb! *hugs you*

aw, you're not hopeless - i found it hard to let the yoosu go as well (biased, much ♥)

i'm glad you liked it, though! i'll get around to writing a fluffy story to make up for it one day :)