Sense [[keeps giving me reasons to love you]] Changmin//Yoochun ; Yoochun//Junsu PG-13 ; Angst/Romance ; Band!verse 9, 855 words Changmin was a rational man... then he met Yoochun For my super wonderful
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I really loved it, even though it left me with this kind of a bittersweet feeling. Everything here was just perfect: the unrequited love, Changmin's longing for Yoochun to love him back, the sacrifice, the need/hunger for love. I'm glad that you didn't make Yoochun so quickly say "those words", especially after his heart was broken because of Junsu. I also really liked the part about Junsu where, in a way, he also had to struggle with his own confused feelings, beliefs and his faith
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awww, your comment flatters me so, bb! ♥ and nope, i do not mind the long comment - i love them :)
i wanted to try to make it as real as possible, and a little angst makes things flow better, or maybe i'm just quite sadistic... and, yes, all the characters struggle with something, and in the end... i'm not quite sure myself who i felt the most for...
yes, it is hard to imagine the band no longer singing and dancing on stage... but i'm sure, like you said, that no one will take it as hard as the band themselves.
First there is Changmin suffering, then Yoochun, then they get together but then not quite, then the band break up at the end.
I really don't know what hurts the most... I felt sorry for Min at first and couldn't think of anything else to do other than hit Yoochun hard. But then, Yoochun also suffers from unrequited love and it breaks my heart again. I confess I didn't like the way Chun proposes to be with Min just because one of them had the right to be happy. From my own experience, in the end, it hurts even more. And it did, and Changmin paid the price.
You know, when chun finally said 'I love you' I didn't feel like he meant it. I'm not sure if its the whole angst surrounding the story or if its just me, but it felt somewhat forced.
And until the end, I still felt like he didn't meant it. At least not all of it. Feels like he loves Min, but not the way he was supposed to. (omg, I can't seem to explain myself, pardon me I'm not making any sense at all hahaha
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First off, wow, your comment is not lame at all. I very much enjoyed your thoughts, a wonderful opinion! ♥
ah *hugs* It does hurt - I'm not quite ready for the band to breakup either, that would kill me. And yes, religion is such a... terrible thing at times. They teach that you're supposed to love and treat everyone equally, yet, it doesn't happen. I'm in the same boat with you on that. And when you've grown up thinking and believing the things I'm sure have been pressed upon Junsu, it just hurts to know that it can keep true love apart.
No, Yoochun's reasonings aren't smart, and I feel that it's because he thinks with his heart and not with his head - he's not a very rational person. Changmin is stubborn, and I would believe that if he wasn't so stubborn and in love, he probably would've let Yoochun go... And you are right. Yoochun doesn't love Changmin in the way that Min loves him; more of a platonic love, not the kind he holds for Junsu. I understood what you meant, though, so no worries
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writing JaeSu is a WONDERFUL thing haha (because JaeSu is also my OTP... yes I have way too many OTPs lol)
and you're welcome ♥
I love to give comments, but sometimes I'm scared people can't understand me since english is not my first language and such and I usually end up writing things that makes no sense at all lol
*tears* I can't believe dbsk broke up. I cnt live with out our boys. T^T And awe Minnie&Chunnie are so cute! ^c^ in the middle I thought 4 sure tht Chunnie&Junnie were going to be to gether but no. Its Minnie&Chunnie. Ah I lyked this fic! As always! ^c^
Awe thnks. -hugs back- but it does make yu think wen they wil brake up. Thts wen it'll be sad cuz it'll b real. :( and yur welcome! Yur fics are always my favorite! :D
This is so beautifully bittersweet...of course disbandment is always heartbreaking but well, we know these 5 will always be together spiritually.
I hurt so bad for Changmin, Yoochun and Junsu but I am glad that Changmin finally accepted that in a way, he has to share Yoochun and that Junsu loves Yoochun equally as much. I am happy that Changmin and Yoochun has each other but how I wish that Junsu could truly accept his feelings and be part of the Yoomin life too.
disbandment is very heartbreaking - I dread the day when they retire. :(
I know, in the end, all three hurt in this fic - and mainly for the same reason: love. Yes, Changmin does accept the fact that Yoochun will never belong to him fully, and that in itself is quite... ;__; and Junsu... maybe in time he'll be able to join them, who knows.
I'm sorry, Chloe Boo! *huggles* I'll try to make it up to you <333
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i wanted to try to make it as real as possible, and a little angst makes things flow better, or maybe i'm just quite sadistic... and, yes, all the characters struggle with something, and in the end... i'm not quite sure myself who i felt the most for...
yes, it is hard to imagine the band no longer singing and dancing on stage... but i'm sure, like you said, that no one will take it as hard as the band themselves.
thank you for your amazing comment, sweetie! ♥
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First there is Changmin suffering, then Yoochun, then they get together but then not quite, then the band break up at the end.
I really don't know what hurts the most...
I felt sorry for Min at first and couldn't think of anything else to do other than hit Yoochun hard. But then, Yoochun also suffers from unrequited love and it breaks my heart again.
I confess I didn't like the way Chun proposes to be with Min just because one of them had the right to be happy. From my own experience, in the end, it hurts even more. And it did, and Changmin paid the price.
You know, when chun finally said 'I love you' I didn't feel like he meant it. I'm not sure if its the whole angst surrounding the story or if its just me, but it felt somewhat forced.
And until the end, I still felt like he didn't meant it. At least not all of it. Feels like he loves Min, but not the way he was supposed to. (omg, I can't seem to explain myself, pardon me I'm not making any sense at all hahaha ( ... )
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ah *hugs* It does hurt - I'm not quite ready for the band to breakup either, that would kill me. And yes, religion is such a... terrible thing at times. They teach that you're supposed to love and treat everyone equally, yet, it doesn't happen. I'm in the same boat with you on that. And when you've grown up thinking and believing the things I'm sure have been pressed upon Junsu, it just hurts to know that it can keep true love apart.
No, Yoochun's reasonings aren't smart, and I feel that it's because he thinks with his heart and not with his head - he's not a very rational person. Changmin is stubborn, and I would believe that if he wasn't so stubborn and in love, he probably would've let Yoochun go... And you are right. Yoochun doesn't love Changmin in the way that Min loves him; more of a platonic love, not the kind he holds for Junsu. I understood what you meant, though, so no worries ( ... )
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and you're welcome ♥
I love to give comments, but sometimes I'm scared people can't understand me since english is not my first language and such and I usually end up writing things that makes no sense at all lol
*sits and waits for JaeSu* lol
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don't worry, i speak english as my native language, and still have a terrible time at making sense of my words xD
*hugs* *gets to work on jaesu*
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I can't believe dbsk broke up. I cnt live with out our boys.
T^T
And awe Minnie&Chunnie are so cute! ^c^ in the middle I thought 4 sure tht Chunnie&Junnie were going to be to gether but no. Its Minnie&Chunnie. Ah I lyked this fic! As always! ^c^
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i'm glad you liked it~ thanks, bb! *huggles*
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I hurt so bad for Changmin, Yoochun and Junsu but I am glad that Changmin finally accepted that in a way, he has to share Yoochun and that Junsu loves Yoochun equally as much. I am happy that Changmin and Yoochun has each other but how I wish that Junsu could truly accept his feelings and be part of the Yoomin life too.
You made me cry, my dana boo...
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I know, in the end, all three hurt in this fic - and mainly for the same reason: love. Yes, Changmin does accept the fact that Yoochun will never belong to him fully, and that in itself is quite... ;__; and Junsu... maybe in time he'll be able to join them, who knows.
I'm sorry, Chloe Boo! *huggles* I'll try to make it up to you <333
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more perhaps?
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