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daynah_bo

Dearly Beloved (chapter 2)

Sep 02, 2008 20:04

Dearly Beloved
Chapter Two
The Act Of Preparing

( Prologue) | ( Chapter One: So Much For The Wedding Night)

( I remember... )

length: multiple, p: yunho/jaejoong, fic: dearly beloved, p: yoochun/junsu

Comments 52

lastclasshero September 3 2008, 04:14:12 UTC

hahahah poor su...yoochun sounds like a perverted deprived guy here ahahahha.

can't wait for the next chapter! xD

daynah_bo September 3 2008, 11:35:09 UTC

HAHAHAHA! Does he? Aw, *pats Chunnie* I didn't mean to make you deprived. ^^ But a pervert was intentional--how else will you get some love from Su? :P

I'll try my best to update soon so you won't have to wait too long for the next update. Thanks <3

lollyribena September 3 2008, 05:38:49 UTC

I find myself with a smirk, trying my best not to laugh out. (My maid is sweeping in my room).

This part really struck my humour nerve,
Junsu placed his hand on Yoochun’s wavy brown locks, running his fingers through the strands absentmindedly, as he answered, “Scary man isn’t very smart.”

Su! How can Yoochun not love you when you do that?!!
You so deserve a cookie
*hands Yunjae cookie*

daynah_bo September 3 2008, 11:38:02 UTC

Haha. You can let it all out on the computer, dear! ^^

I had so much fun with that scene! Su and Chunnie are already flirting with each other--and all lovey dovey! :P and I like their characters (seperate/together) so it was only natural they got to steal the spotlight for a few seconds!

Thank you for the cookie. Very delicious (and smexy too)!
<3

kattan69 September 3 2008, 05:45:13 UTC

This is becoming more like a circus here with all these odd-ball characters....the kidnappers (looking-scary Chun and lovable-who-took-the-wrong-person Yunho, the so-called saviour (who is too cute for words) Junsu and the not-so-thrilled-victim-who-looks-like-a-girl Jae.

Quite funny the way Jae narrated the story...

Anyway, pls do continue and thanks!

daynah_bo September 3 2008, 11:40:23 UTC

I know! They are the worst kidnappers EVER! But even so, I would not mind being kidnapped by them. ^^

Mmm, when I had begun to write this, I did not like the way it started unless I had it being narrated by Jae (I tried several characters as well as 3rd person--not good at all!) So, I am glad everyone likes Jae's horribly-jumpy train-of-thought as well as narration.

I will continue very soon! Thanks <3

asuka2507 September 3 2008, 05:55:49 UTC

lol xD too friendly for kidnappers... lol junsu in the trunk... i wonder how he looks like... lol

daynah_bo September 3 2008, 11:41:47 UTC

lol. They are quite friendly. I like it that way (better for the YooSu and YunJae) And, yes, Junsu was their stowaway! I bet it was a less-than-pleasant ride (being in the trunk and all)

thanks for commenting <3 I'll update soon!

nericia September 3 2008, 06:20:50 UTC

I loved it! Yoochun the scary man :) I think Yoochun is the last person who can be scary :)Anyway, I really love this fic, hope you update soon ;)

daynah_bo September 3 2008, 11:43:14 UTC

Thank you -bows- and agreed. Yoochun is far from scary! :) But Junsu loves him no matter what! :) lol.

Thank you, and I will try my best to update very soon! <3