time in a bottle 16 "Long Cool Woman"

[pengyn]

Title: Time in a Bottle
Chapter: 16. "Long Cool Woman" 
Author: pengyn
Rating: Teen
Spoilers: Through to "The End"
Summary: James returns to the real world, trying to deal with his grief and still hold on to his memories of Juliet. Meanwhile, thirty years earlier, a series of sabotages in Dharmaville leads him to suspect the one person he doesn't want to

Comments

[tia_no_one]

OMG, this was amazing. The banter! So beyond perfect I can't even.

Juliet explaining she understands how Richard thinks was so fascinating. There are so many secrets she must have held, and you showed that perfectly.

And the end was hot. <3

[pengyn]

I could seriously just sit and write banter all day! That's kinda how this chapter happened and I've only just realized that it didn't end like my fic-map told it to. I was too busy getting them to flirt - oh well!

[aquaeous_cloud]

Amazing. Simpy Amazing.

They are so cute. Love their banter in this one soooo fucking much.

[pengyn]

Aw thank you!! Honestly, their banter is my absolute favorite to write.

[ally88]

d'awww they are so cute! Love this chapter <3

[pengyn]

Thank you hun!!

[lormats]

ok, first hot!, second... their conversation was amazing... I totally could picture it in my head...the voices were ... I can't even found the words... :)

[pengyn]

LOL! Thanks, hun, I'm so glad you enjoyed it :D

[propernice]

SEXY TIMES IN THE BACK OF THE VAN PLEASE.

ahem.

What I mean is, this was a delightful chapter, and I love how well they know each other and their back and forth rapport.

[pengyn]

I CAN'T HAVE THEIR FIRST TIME BE IN THE BACK OF A DHARMA VAN YOU HORNY WENCH, THOUGH DON'T FOR ONE MINUTE THINK I DIDN'T SIT FOR AGES AND WONDER IF THEY COULD

cough.

What I meant to say is, thank you ever so much for such a splendid review and I shall endeavor to please you further in future writings.