time in a bottle 20 "won't get fooled again"

[pengyn]

Title: Time in a Bottle
Chapter: 20. "won't get fooled again" 
Author: pengyn
Rating: Teen
Spoilers: Through to "The End"
Summary: James returns to the real world, trying to deal with his grief and still hold on to his memories of Juliet. Meanwhile, thirty years earlier, a series of sabotages in Dharmaville leads him to suspect the one person he doesn't

Comments

[propernice]

I'M LEAVING A COMMENT RIGHT NOW JUST TO SAY I HAVE THIS KNOT IN MY STOMACH GOING INTO IT AND I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO DO ABOUT IT AND IT'S THAT OLD FAMILIAR FEELING OF LOST COMING ON AND JUST KNOWING THAT SOME SHIT IS GOING DOWN AND YOU'RE ON EDGE.

LOL OKAY GOING TO READ NOW, I APOLOGIZE FOR THIS COMMENT AND ITS EXCESSIVE CAPSLOCK.

[pengyn]

Your excessive capslock is adorable :D

You have a knot in your stomach? Best compliment evuh!

[lormats]

I'm not you biggest fan RN, why, why, why the need of cliffhangers??? *stalking mode on* C'mon girl! *stalking mode off*

Did I mention how much I love the chapter? and I thought you were gonna end it here “By tracin’ Juliet’s last steps.” and I was like noooo then I scroll down and I was like piuf, and then... *shakes head* you're just mean...

[pengyn]

:p

Six years of watching Lost, I learned a few things. I'm keeping the spirit alive by continuing to torture, chapter by chapter.

[lormats]

It's not fair you know, you make me eat chocolate, I needed to eat chocolate after the chapter, and I was keeping on my diet all week long until today, I cave... Do you realize what you are doing to me?

Just asking do you know how many more cchapters are you planning to do? (thinking about summer is just around the corener, and oh yeah! my well being *drama queen*)

[pengyn]

*snickers*

*general disclaimer - I cannot be held responsible for people's dietary failures.

Chapter wise - I think I'm about 5 or 6 chapters from the end :-)

[propernice]

James had discovered one in his bedroom a month back and just covered it up with the dresser, telling himself he’d fix it some other time.

AUGHHH

I LOVE the part where James is trying to figure out her note - I could see it on his face, exactly what he looked like and the MINUTE the realization crept in. AMAZING.

I CANNOT.

WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER OMG HNNNNNNNNNNG YOU HAVE REDUCED ME TO MAKING SOUNDS.

[pengyn]

LOL you're just a puddle of capslock. I haven't started the next chapter yet - although I have to double check my fic map but I think the next chapter is post-Island. *waits for heads to explode* I'll try not to keep everyone hanging too long!

[propernice]

[pengyn]

ROFL.

[afishwithawish]

He never fixed the floorboard.. :'3

Great chapter. I love pissed James. Go kill that sonuvabitch. Update soon! <3

[pengyn]

Thank you, hun.

James - when he's pissed - one of my favorite things ever.

[realist_romance]

[pengyn]

That would be nice too - but James doesn't know that Widmore was behind it so he has to settle for the next best thing.