time in a bottle 20 "won't get fooled again"

[pengyn]

Title: Time in a Bottle
Chapter: 20. "won't get fooled again" 
Author: pengyn
Rating: Teen
Spoilers: Through to "The End"
Summary: James returns to the real world, trying to deal with his grief and still hold on to his memories of Juliet. Meanwhile, thirty years earlier, a series of sabotages in Dharmaville leads him to suspect the one person he doesn't

Comments

[pengyn]

What an awesome comment! Thank you :-)

[tia_no_one]

OMG such an awesome chapter! Oh, the suspense! Can't wait for more.

[pengyn]

Thank you!! I love me some suspense :D

[katinka_reptar]

I'm gonna tell you right now that I fell asleep with my hand on my laptop last night about to go to your LJ and read this. Hence why I'm leaving a comment this morning.
Woops.
ANYWAY. So I love this and I love when James is all serious and delegating and heroic. My baby <3

I LOVE that you did a cliffhanger though, it makes it so much better. I can just picture the sound and then LOST. Commercial.

THIS IS GREAT BYE.

[pengyn]

Aw Boo, I can just imagine your sweet stupid face falling asleep at your laptop.

I LOVE ending stuff on cliffhangers. Neat little bows are for one shots :D

[mfirefly10]

I thought that was the perfect end to the chapter. Cruel yes, but also perfect :) (Darn you and your love of cliffhangers!)

I love how James worked out what her note meant. Like, at first he couldn't make sense of it and then it came to him just like she knew it would. Such a nice, subtle reference to how well they've come to know each other.

[pengyn]

Yep, BB James knows her so well - even if he hasn't exactly realized that he does!