Fic: Ochi Chornye (Dark Eyes), part two

[dealliasnape]

See: Part One for headers and details.

Comments

[lady_sallie]

Its the Holmes and Watson version of the Pina Colada song! *L* I loved this,especially the bit with Mycroft, that was hysterical!.

[dealliasnape]

Lol. Thank you!

[lagolindari]

Utter, complete and undying love.
I shall be back shortly with a more coherent comment... after a re-read or five ♥.

[dealliasnape]

Thank you so much!

[pinkhairdreams]

that was quite possibly the cutest thing i have read in ages.

also i love how you totally captured Holmes' ADHD (trust me this is totally what he has) i love it!

[pinkhairdreams]

also you just inspired a rediculous idea in my head for a fic. from this line

“I have a running bet with an… acquaintance of mine, for when I can drive a new roommate off. If my roommate is gone before she’s bored with her new husband, I win.”

i think i may just have to write their on going correspondence for the duration of this bet. you dont mind do you?

[dealliasnape]

Mind? I'm highly flattered, and I would love to read that! (Please send link when you're finished?)

I'm so glad it was liked! Thank you!

[dealliasnape]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad it was enjoyed!

[random_nexus]

*Bouncing ovation! The crowd goes wild!*
I loved it! Excellently well done. The shifts of perspective as each learned more about the other - beautifully portrayed! It has the flavor of canon, but there seems an admixture of movie 'verse, too. However, this worked well for ME and I enjoyed thoroughly!

This is going into memories!
:D

[dealliasnape]

I'm highly flattered, thank you so very much! I'm glad the changing feelings worked, especially since that was something I stuggled with. Thank you!