too close for comfort.
I initially wrote this poem just for me, as it's about something way too close to my heart. But then I realised that posting it here may provide some sort of relief from the negative feelings in me about this particular subject. It's worth a shot, right? I'll think of this as free therapy...
My Once Hero
by Genevieve Magee
you words to me
will never be ( Read more... )
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prefer some kind of critical help rather then .. "yeh your poem was great. full stop"... so yeh i like hearing what people actually think about my writing.. enough about me ... i really like the way you translate your emotions into actual tangible pictures to help represent your experience. I think that is what connects to the audience who find they can relate to it.
i cant really find anything wrong with it i really enjoyed it.. i dont think its a bad thing either that it is broad. i think it just braodens also the amount of people who find they have experienced similar things. Although i think you if you wanted to improve the poem further then you could expand on the point of the poem. to further reinforce and make clearer your point...
but none-the-less..
good work..
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