Depth Perception 3/3

Jun 15, 2010 04:50

Title: Depth Perception
Pairing: Jeff/Annie, ensemble
Word Count: 3726
Ratings/Warnings: PG-13, leaning into R
Spoilers: Season 1
Disclaimer: I do not own Community or these characters, oh but Dan Harmon I love you for life.
Description: Annie and Jeff’s relationship - what the group sees, and more importantly, what they don’t.
Author’s Note: ( Read more... )

community, depth perception, fanfiction, jeff/annie

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risskabob June 15 2010, 13:03:36 UTC
My favorite part about this story (and there were a whole lot of things to like) was how you captured their feelings leading up to their romance. Annie's especially were so very real. <3

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dearygirl June 16 2010, 05:23:18 UTC
I'm so glad you like it! I find Jeff and Annie to both be fascinating characters so it's fun to explore what their emotions might be within a relationship with each other. Thank you for the comment!

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solsty June 15 2010, 15:01:29 UTC
Wow, the bedroom stuff was pretty hot. And Pierce knowing that Jeff was "busy banging Perky Boobs" made me lol. I really enjoyed it and you've done a great job.
That being said, I'm seriously jealous that you've met Joel McHale. :)

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dearygirl June 16 2010, 05:24:29 UTC
Thank you so much! The bedroom stuff was fun to write.

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spottedpenguin June 15 2010, 15:29:49 UTC
As I read this, I was also composing a very-detailed feedback in which I was tallying up everything I loved about it. Then I got to Jeff & Annie's bedroom study session, and I'm not entirely sure what happened to those coherent and logical thoughts, but they went bye-bye. Brain no multitask anymore.

So really, it's all your fault that you're getting this non-specific review with a simple "I adore this story and everything in it."

(It might also be your fault if I enroll in college *again* in an attempt to find a study group with its own Jeff Winger and then force him to recreate that study scene in every steamy detail. But I will be classy enough not to inform you if that actually does happen, because hello? Boundaries, even on the internet, are important. )

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lapacifidora June 16 2010, 03:05:34 UTC
I second this. Actually, if I could clone myself, I'd also third this feedback. This was awesome in a way that I can't describe.

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dearygirl June 17 2010, 00:00:17 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

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dearygirl June 16 2010, 05:27:50 UTC
Thank you so much! I enjoyed writing that scene so I'm so glad that everyone likes it.

And heehee, good luck on your quest for your own Jeff Winger. *sigh* I'd like one of those myself.

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arabian June 15 2010, 16:30:24 UTC
Fantastic. I would quote my favorite parts, but I'd run out of space. Let me just say that this was a delicious way of looking at them from the outside, from both the writer's perspective, as well as the other characters. Great job. :D

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dearygirl June 16 2010, 05:31:26 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed! It was interesting to play with the different ways that Annie and Jeff's relationship could be viewed. Like, we as shippers can pick apart every little moment but not all the characters will see those same moments. Thank you for the comment!

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1epic_love June 15 2010, 16:34:31 UTC
So cute!

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dearygirl June 16 2010, 05:31:41 UTC
Thank you!

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