anything's righter than books could plan (2/2)

[dearygirl]

Apologies to my best friend V. Several of the scenes here were inspired by the night she gave birth to her little girl.

Much thanks as always to the lovely 0penhearts  for the beta and for epic ideas for Troy/Abed shenanigans.

Titles comes from e.e. cummings.

Comments

[michellek]

I don't even know what to say except I LOVED THIS. Everything was spot-on, and I adore how you wrote Britta.

[dulcedeusex]

Annie smiles at it adoringly and runs her fingers along the plush ears. “No. I love it. She’ll love it.” She eyes Jeff out of the corner of her eye and sighs, “Jeff’s hogging her.”

“Hey, you got to hold her for the last nine months. My turn.”

-- I'm a fan of babyfic but only if its done right. LOVED THis.

[sowritesauds]

It's pretty rare to read fanfic that actually makes you tear up. But this was so sweet and beautifully written! So full of real emotion and heart. I'm impressed, and I loved it! Thanks so much for sharing. :)

[glorious_clio]

Okay, so I loved this. And it's not even the adorableness of it all (though that certainly helps), and the baby and Jeff holding the baby... but it's Britta. She's not the worst, she doesn't screw it up. She's strong for Annie, and she's a freaking awesome friend here. I just... if I ever have kids, I want a friend like this is my partner can't be there for me. Because oh my gosh, the strength of their bond is... beyond words now. Sorry, Jeff.

And Abed and Troy! I loved the Breakfast Club speech, and their side adventure (oh god - is Jeff ready for a malpractice suit? Though I'm fairly certain Abed did everything right). And then They proceeded to sing her an off-key version of Happy Birthday that somehow lasted about five minutes long and meandered into a beat box rap about babies and cake and turtles that made Britta laugh so hard tears started running down her cheeks.

Yes. Everything about this is perfect.