Discretion (3/?)

Nov 15, 2010 12:15

Pairing: Annie/Jeff
Spoilers: Through 2.03
Word Count: 1993
Rating: PG-13 for language
Disclaimer: I do not own Community.
Description: Missing moment for The Psychology of Letting Go
Author's Note: As always, a million thanks to 0penhearts  for the beta, encouragement and general awesomeness.

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lunamystik November 16 2010, 03:01:34 UTC
Oh, Jeff. Oh, Annie. They just seem so *broken* here. (sniff)

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dearygirl November 16 2010, 07:15:05 UTC
*tissue*

I know. *Sigh* I try not to write them so angsty but it just happens. No worries though, the next few installments should be much more lighthearted.

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lapacifidora November 16 2010, 03:04:39 UTC
Annie, oblivious to Jeff’s meltdown and obvious pain and suffering is still smiling up at the nameless random idiot that’s drooling over her like an un-neutered puppy.

Bahahaha. I kept waiting for your Jeff to develop an eye tick.

“The cute ones are probably going to die first,” he blurts out.

Why don't we get verbal diahhrea!Jeff on the show? (And why did I put an exclamation point there?)

Annie continues, “You know, my dad has high cholesterol. It’s not-” The words die in her throat as Jeff whips his head back around to stare at her incredulously.

XD Oh, god, can we please have Annie's parents on the show now? Just so we can have the awkward scenario of her dad being all 'Wait. *You're* Jeff Winger?'

There’s a brief mental gymnastics routine in his head as he fights back an utterly irrational jealousy of Abed and an image of Annie in a button-down dress shirt (his dress shirt) while simultaneously perusing his endless arsenal of snarky one-liners.

I loved this.

“Uhh. Well, sometimes I can be too awesome.”I, too, have this ( ... )

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dearygirl November 16 2010, 07:13:07 UTC
I LOVE long comments like this! THANK YOU SO MUCH!

Why don't we get verbal diahhrea!Jeff on the show? (And why did I put an exclamation point there?)

I'm perpetually 12 so this just made me laugh really hard.

XD Oh, god, can we please have Annie's parents on the show now?

I NEED this to happen.

FF prompt, me thinks?

SO. MANY. POSSIBILITIES.

OMG, now I'm imagining a whole fic where they're trying to seduce each other to see who cracks first. Jeff with his words and Annie with her Disney!eyes. Crap.

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blithers November 16 2010, 08:16:05 UTC
Jumping in on this comment to say YES! We very much need Annie and Jeff in a seduction-off. The focus. The determination. The inability of either to admit defeat. It would be nothing less than epic.

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blithers November 16 2010, 08:10:41 UTC
OK, wow. You have such a knack for writing the character voices, and here I love how you're taking the little issues that's we're coming across in this season and just OWNING them. Like how Annie needs to see Jeff as a regular person, and needs to grow up, and Jeff needs to come to terms with... oh, so many things.

You know my ideal Jeff and Britta relationship? When they're sniping at each other like siblings who half hate and half love each other. They have a great dismissively bantering vibe, but I like how here (as in the last episode) when Annie and Jeff get into it with each other they are TOTALLY INTO IT, and Britta doesn't even factor in. Angry!Jeff and angry!Annie is fast becoming my favorite conversation mode. (I'm pretty sure that's not healthy, but what can you do?)

“The cute ones are probably going to die first,” he blurts out.

This made me laugh out loud.

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