Comments | dearygirl: red light, green light

dearygirl

red light, green light

Nov 28, 2010 19:51

Pairing: Jeff/Annie
Spoilers: Through 2.09
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1296
Disclaimer: I still don't own Community.
Description: Post-Blanket Fort Collapse 2010

Author's Note: The plethora of lovely fics that have been posted since 2.09 aired has filled my little heart with a lot of joy. This is me throwing my hat into the ring. I hope you enjoy.

( The blankets fall, a single sheet drifting over them in pink-hued dome of seclusion. )

community, fanfiction, jeff/annie

Comments 49

judykim97 November 29 2010, 18:22:29 UTC

Lovely. I love your subtle depiction of Jeff's constant inner struggle when it comes to Annie. I love that Annie had the wherewithal to wait for Jeff to kiss her first this time. I love that they lost track of time in the car. I love that their light finally turns green.

<3 <3 <3

Thank you for this beautiful fic!

dearygirl December 2 2010, 06:24:27 UTC

You're welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I feel like Jeff would definitely be in a constant inner struggle over his feelings for Annie - knowing it's a bad idea, that he could be bad for her, what would their friends say, yadda, yadda, yadda and yet still just WANTING her.

Thank you for reading and commenting!

whitters23 November 29 2010, 19:17:48 UTC

*claps* This was so wonderful! Not only was if chock full of shippy goodness but it also felt real, the background ensemble worked perfectly.
And of course I loved the hotness that ensued afterwards. ;)
I love that Jeff's still trying to be the voice of reason and trying to resist but not being able to hold out for long.
I really believe that the onscreen story may progress a lot like that. :)
So well done!!

dearygirl December 2 2010, 06:27:16 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked the ensemble stuff. Writing that always makes me so nervous because everyone has just a specific voice and especially someone like Troy, I'm mean, he's TROY! Everything he says on those show is golden. How do you capture that? So I'm so so happy you enjoyed that.

I really hope the onscreen relationship progresses like this too. Fingers crossed.

Thank you again!

michellek November 29 2010, 22:37:13 UTC

Looooooove this.

dearygirl December 2 2010, 06:24:43 UTC

I'm so glad! Thank you!

wallows November 30 2010, 02:10:22 UTC

Oh you write such lovely things. I love the stop/go intersection, that's totally where they're at. Glad you finally threw your hat on to this.

dearygirl December 2 2010, 06:27:59 UTC

Thank you so much! I loved writing it so I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

ravenecho November 30 2010, 10:27:08 UTC

I love this story. You create a really beautiful imagery with your stories that I really enjoy reading.

P.S. I have to disagree with Britta, I saw Metallica in concert a couple of weeks ago and they were incredible. :P

dearygirl December 2 2010, 06:31:24 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it!

Haha, I had a friend who used to rant and rave about how Metallica sold out and on and on and on... Which was actually really annoying because it drives me a little batty when people complain about bands "selling out." But it was something I could see Britta complaining about. Because, well, she's Britta. And I'm jealous you got to see them in concert. I still think their awesome.

Thank you for the comment!