Comments | dearygirl: red light, green light

dearygirl

red light, green light

Nov 28, 2010 19:51

Pairing: Jeff/Annie
Spoilers: Through 2.09
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1296
Disclaimer: I still don't own Community.
Description: Post-Blanket Fort Collapse 2010

Author's Note: The plethora of lovely fics that have been posted since 2.09 aired has filled my little heart with a lot of joy. This is me throwing my hat into the ring. I hope you enjoy.

( The blankets fall, a single sheet drifting over them in pink-hued dome of seclusion. )

community, fanfiction, jeff/annie

Comments 49

lymanlover November 30 2010, 17:35:54 UTC

Okay, I absolutely lose it when I see you've posted something. I seriously sat myself down after dancing around the room and then just couldn't stop smiling at the perfection. Your work is really some of the best and I find myself going back to read it a lot, it's just so lovely. Especially in the J/A drought we had this season, your writing is the perfect antidote.

Oh plus, EEEEEEE THEY KISS! Never fails to make me giddy

dearygirl December 2 2010, 06:33:36 UTC

Oh my gosh you're so sweet. Thank you! This comment has given me the warm fuzzies. The perfect antidote for my crappy day.

As I commented to someone above, I will usually find any excuse to make Jeff and Annie kiss. Lol. So I'm so glad you liked it.

Again, thank you. Seriously.

lunamystik November 30 2010, 22:08:55 UTC

Oh, I just loved this! The last line was perfect, and the rest was poignant and very real.

dearygirl December 2 2010, 06:34:00 UTC

Thank you so much!!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

kyjori December 6 2010, 23:30:15 UTC

Wow, you are simply an amazing writer!
I love how you can pace things, carry the story so smoothly without relying on so much dialogue and what not. Your descriptions are crazy awesome too!
Thanks for the great stories =)

lapacifidora March 27 2011, 05:07:28 UTC

I'll be in my bunk.

(I loved that you let them have that moment at the stop light. In other fics/novels/TV shows/movies/etc., there's always a car that honks and breaks the spell.)

dearygirl April 16 2011, 19:44:24 UTC

Hee! Thank you so much! And it's funny because I almost didn't even let them have that moment at all and it was going to end on a darker note. But dammit, these two just wanted to make out. And who am I to stop them? ;)

lapacifidora May 15 2011, 00:11:51 UTC

A darker note? These two? (Actually, I can see that.)

I approve of your being unable or unwilling to stop them. :D