DBSK Fic #1.4: Anata no Memory Chapter 4

[deathbyaccident]

Title : Anata no Memory(chaptered)
Parts: Chapter 4/15 + Epilogue
Pairing : [DBSK Fandom] JaeChun at prologue. Oh wait, don't run away! JaeHo, of course.
Rating : PG, drama, AU
Author : Randix
Disclaimer : No, the boys belong to themselves. I'm just a poor writer.
Summary : /AU/ How on earth will Yunho and Jae Joong find themselves together, when

Comments

[didikoishi]

An nyong ha sye yo!
I'm a new reader ^__^ Your fic is amazing!!!
Keep up the great work please, I'm looking forward to the next installment.

[deathbyaccident]

Annyeong! New reader, I'm so happy! :)
Thank you for reading, I'm glad you liked this chapter.
I've put the next chapter up as well, so I hope you'll be able to read that too!

*gives you cookies*

[mythgoddess24]

wow...umm....excuse me *grabs tissue* T.T This is really pulls at my heartstrings. And while I'm not full out bawling...I'm momentarily lost for words. This is such a good story, very dramatic settings. It's so wonderfully written. I like the natural feel of your story. !!

*sigh* i'd love to keep commenting..if i wasn't so speechless. But Good job and great update!

[mythgoddess24]

oh and while i was reading this..I was listening to "heart, mind, and soul" by DBSK ..and I think it made this story more dramatic for me. *cries*

[deathbyaccident]

I love "Heart, Mind and Soul" too!
Thank you for reading this story, I'm glad you liked it!

*hugs you* There. I hope that made you feel a little better. :)

[rainbowpebbles]

oh my gosh. i love this line. seriously.

After all, it sounded strangely like that crucial point in movies when the heart stops, and there was nothing else to see in the monitor but a solitary flat line.

poor yunnie and his whole "i-suck-at-being-a-doctor" thing. ;_____; and it's really sad that there's no cure or anything. *gives author a miffed glare* you evil thing you.

oh no chun and his big proposal!!! but me thinks that jae won't accept it, because he wouldn't want chun to turn into a widow in case he dies right?? XDDD but that's just me and my thinking (which is rather jaeho-biased) ^-^ after all, jaeho can't get together if jae and chun are bounded together by marriage.

and do i spot a little, teeny, wincy spot of yoosu? ^o^

ehehehehe!! really enjoying this!!!! you rock, stone and pebble XD XD XD update again soon!!! <3333

[deathbyaccident]

Yes, there's Yoosu! Seriously, I still have no idea HOW to get JJ and Yunnie together without breaking Chunnie's heart. Oh, for the love of Jaeho *head desk* What a dilemma.

Thanks for reading, dearie! *hugs you like crazy*

[mysexyboo]

homg homg what a chappie! there was so much drama, the title was a big-eyed one to start with. joongie's positive diagnosis report (i twisted my fingers too when the first 2 were negative) and yoochun's PROPOSAL! that was one of the cutest way to propose, because its yoochun hahaha.

i love you for your fic! really i love dramas. *huggies* this just got a whole lot more stalker-ish for me and im gonna look out for Anata no memory everytime. :)

i failed my papers too, sucks. oh that was sucha party pooper. nvm lets work hard! :D :D THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE! update soon!

[deathbyaccident]

I ♥ your icon. I really can't get over JJ's cuteness no matter how many times I see that image. O_O

Maa, I'm glad you liked this chapter, though I myself am not very good in handling drama fics (as a writer or a reader, methinks)! And haha, I can actually see Yoochun proposing like that. I mean, he's like . . . that kind of romantic and spontaneous kind of guy. *sighs dreamily*

Mysexyboo, HWAITING!! Good luck with your papers too! XD

[catachrestical]

This is written very well. Brilliant, even. I love the style you're using and choice of words and how they just build up the tension.

At this point, I don't really care whether you have your facts straight or not :') I bought it anyway.

Good work. More, please?

[deathbyaccident]

Ah, it's you! The one who's writing Our Little Princess! I just found it and am currently reading, so I'll be off to comment later. But to start. . .I like it! Especially since they're in Japan. I like Dong Bang fics with the Japanese stuff on it. I don't know, the boys' Japanese sound cute, lol.

Thank you for reading this chapter! I don't really care whether you have your facts straight or not Haha, thank you. That bit really made me smile!

*gives you cookies*

[audient]

Cookies!

...I mean. Yeah. Hi 8'D You might've seen me comment a couple times in your previous chapters. WE'RE THE SAME PERSON. Catachrestical's just the writing journal ^^;

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