Reid supposed Gideon wouldn't be able to hear Hotch's nudity... but he was glad of his own layer of respectable flannel as he moved to the far side of the room and speed-dialed Prentiss.
this made me laugh out loud - good stuff.
Seeing Hotch sitting there on the bed was almost like looking at a painting -- Nude with Cell Phone; but a painting that could look back at you, and know what you were thinking.
Not that I get fixated by a Naked Hotch or anything . . . but this is a great image.
I love this series from you and think you have captured the characters and their interactions beautifully. Reid coming up with answers during sex is so "him" and bless Hotch for taking it so well.
Thank you, sweets! Hm, I wonder what Thomas Gibson does look like naked... *drifts into reverie...*
Oh, got a little distracted there! *g* Not that I ever really *want* him to take of his FBI suit, mind you. It's so *Hotchesque*.
I hope I can do the next part faster, this was really done a long time ago but wasn't sure if I should stop here. The next bit will introduce an OC *and* the unsub, sigh, argh, hardest parts for me. Thank you so much for patiently reading! :-)
Wonderful plotting, wonderful sex scene (Hotch straddling Reid in that chair and driving him to distraction just...yeah... I'll hold on to that image for a bit.), and even more wonderful character portrayal. I still really, really love your take on these guys; you write both Reid and Hotch beautifully.
If you're anything like me, I'm sure you worry about whether the plot is working, so I'll point out that it truly does. It's an excellent case and I'm all excited now to see the part where they catch up with the unsub. And I adored how Reid cracked the case at the height of orgasm. So perfectly him.
There are so many great things in here, primarily because you have such attention to detail, making everything so vivid. This was my favourite thing, though:
"Tonight," Hotch said. "I didn't expect you to be so abandoned
( ... )
Thanks so much! I really hope I can keep the plot working okay as they actually *encounter* the guy finally! Heh. I know I need to make him extra-creepy.
I liked the chair idea too, I think it would be fun! That is, if I were as skinny as Reid, koff. Course, anything with Hotch would be fun -- he's such a man! So glad you like them & I will try to write faster. They are feeling strangely unromantic right now but that's okay because they have an unsub to catch. :-)
I love this. Reid's orgasm inspiration and Hotch's patience was brilliantly written. And of course the comparison of Hotch's complete comfort in his own skin and Reid's need for flannel.
Thank you! Yeah, I suspect Hotch would be a very patient lover indeed, really. He's usually a really understanding guy.
Maybe if I get this story finished I can *catch up* a little bit to the series, LOL, it's strange being in this historical AU kind of place now, from last March! :-)
I was thinking about this series the other day and wishing for another part! How satisfying to find it this evening.
I continue to love the case, and the way you intertwined it with their passion and exploration of other facets of this new relationship was wonderful. Reid's continued hunger for dilaudid makes me ache for him, and hope that Hotch will hold him tight and keep away the nightmares.
Thanks! Glad you like it and I hope I can speed up a little on it! I know what *happens* in the next bit but you know, it's getting the characters invented and the mood right. The new season is also distracting! :-)
waaah - I want to read this and the previous story so badly but I have to work.... *sighs* Basically, I started reading Sidetrack and I too got sidetracked and began to be immersed in it and then -- time flies.... *deep sigh*
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Reid supposed Gideon wouldn't be able to hear Hotch's nudity... but he was glad of his own layer of respectable flannel as he moved to the far side of the room and speed-dialed Prentiss.
this made me laugh out loud - good stuff.
Seeing Hotch sitting there on the bed was almost like looking at a painting -- Nude with Cell Phone; but a painting that could look back at you, and know what you were thinking.
Not that I get fixated by a Naked Hotch or anything . . . but this is a great image.
I love this series from you and think you have captured the characters and their interactions beautifully. Reid coming up with answers during sex is so "him" and bless Hotch for taking it so well.
Look forward to more.
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Oh, got a little distracted there! *g* Not that I ever really *want* him to take of his FBI suit, mind you. It's so *Hotchesque*.
I hope I can do the next part faster, this was really done a long time ago but wasn't sure if I should stop here. The next bit will introduce an OC *and* the unsub, sigh, argh, hardest parts for me. Thank you so much for patiently reading! :-)
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Wonderful plotting, wonderful sex scene (Hotch straddling Reid in that chair and driving him to distraction just...yeah... I'll hold on to that image for a bit.), and even more wonderful character portrayal. I still really, really love your take on these guys; you write both Reid and Hotch beautifully.
If you're anything like me, I'm sure you worry about whether the plot is working, so I'll point out that it truly does. It's an excellent case and I'm all excited now to see the part where they catch up with the unsub. And I adored how Reid cracked the case at the height of orgasm. So perfectly him.
There are so many great things in here, primarily because you have such attention to detail, making everything so vivid. This was my favourite thing, though:
"Tonight," Hotch said. "I didn't expect you to be so abandoned ( ... )
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I liked the chair idea too, I think it would be fun! That is, if I were as skinny as Reid, koff. Course, anything with Hotch would be fun -- he's such a man! So glad you like them & I will try to write faster. They are feeling strangely unromantic right now but that's okay because they have an unsub to catch. :-)
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Nicely done.
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Maybe if I get this story finished I can *catch up* a little bit to the series, LOL, it's strange being in this historical AU kind of place now, from last March! :-)
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I continue to love the case, and the way you intertwined it with their passion and exploration of other facets of this new relationship was wonderful. Reid's continued hunger for dilaudid makes me ache for him, and hope that Hotch will hold him tight and keep away the nightmares.
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Basically, I started reading Sidetrack and I too got sidetracked and began to be immersed in it and then -- time flies.... *deep sigh*
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