when sad, write Tezu/ Fuji.

[decollement]

Fuji hates that Tezuka is so inscrutable, but if he wasn’t he wouldn’t be as interesting. Things of value require effort, waiting, patient unravelling; constant force applied on lines of stress, on faults in a rock will shatter it.

Only Tezuka never shows his stress and if he has any faults, Fuji cannot find them; he is like water, not the wave

Comments

[mmui]

This doesn't seem pointless at all.

I think you're doing a good job developing them individually and giving the reader a glimpse of how they become who they are.

[decollement]

Thank you! I was afraid it was kind of meandering, but I have a better idea of what to do with it now :)

[kiizu]

Poor Tezuka :( I used to almost-kill my kame because I'd forget about them and they wouldn't get fed for a week. Finally I decided I was too irresponsible to keep any pets that wouldn't disturb me until I fed them so I gave them away. Kame are really hardy, thankfully, or I might have died of guilt at age ten. When I think about MJ and his kame-freezing experiment, though...

Fuji is lovely. I think that was a brilliant idea. If I could draw castles I'd go and do that.
...on a semi-related note, I have (or perhaps used to have) childhood drawings of koi.

[kiizu]

Poor Tezuka :( I used to almost-kill my kame because I'd forget about them and they wouldn't get fed for a week. Finally I decided I was too irresponsible to keep any pets that wouldn't disturb me until I fed them so I gave them away. Kame are really hardy, thankfully, or I might have died of guilt at age ten. When I think about MJ and his kame-freezing experiment, though...

Fuji is lovely. I think that was a brilliant idea. If I could draw castles I'd go and do that.
...on a semi-related note, I have (or perhaps used to have) childhood drawings of koi.