Because...

Apr 06, 2011 02:27


Title: Because... (one-off/drabble)
Author: deepseabed
Pairing: Belldom
Rating: 15
Warnings: Angst. Sexual references.
Summary: It started because...
Disclaimer: It's all fantasy. It happens only in my dreams.
Beta: Chantal. Thank you so much. :)
Feedback: Anything will be loved. ♥

I'm back. I wish I could have written something sweet. Anyway, I hope you like ( Read more... )

belldom, fiction

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stilettoxmafia April 5 2011, 19:35:16 UTC
That was gorgeous.

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deepseabed April 6 2011, 05:17:42 UTC
Thank you! :)

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museylouise April 5 2011, 19:42:14 UTC
Um. Wow.

This was absolutely fantastic, so delicate and fragile and different, but in a good way. I've told you time and time again, but I absolutely love the way you write, it's incredibly poetic and soft, but with so much power.

I love this line: Skin against skin. Fingers on hips. Lips, teeth, tongue on spine. Palm around cock. Hard flesh inside delicate organ.

So simple, yet so creative.

Flawless, I love it. <3

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deepseabed April 6 2011, 05:39:11 UTC
Thank you. <3
Your comment always makes me grin. :D

I don't know if I'm doing that intentionally. I always write what comes to my mind. And when I try to write something without that, I think it's always not good. Maybe, it's about power. I'd like to put some intensity to my stories, like their first album. Tender, lovely pieces are good though.

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terrabrandford April 5 2011, 19:50:35 UTC
*teary eyes*
<3

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deepseabed April 6 2011, 05:40:10 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting. :)

<3

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deepseabed April 6 2011, 05:43:43 UTC
It's really sweet of you to say that! Thank you. ♥

I always, always want some emotion in my stories. So I'm really happy you felt that way.
Thank you so much. :)

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thekeyholder April 5 2011, 21:43:34 UTC
Oh my god, this piece! :'( I'm crying... I'm trying to come up with a comparison, but I'm afraid my words will sound empty. Your story ...was like a tragic character's soliloquy on the stage, everything dark except the spot of light on the actor's face. Do I sound confusing? It's late. *blushes*

I know now why homosexuality has to be outlawed. It could be the first step towards the end of the world.

Well, that made me shiver! Actually, the whole story had that effect on me, but that sentence is striking.

I hope you'll post more frequently! :)

P.S: I meant to ask this for a while *I need to get rid of my shyness*: can I add you as friend? I saw your beautiful drawings on dA. <333

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deepseabed April 6 2011, 07:19:40 UTC
Oh, your words just made me really happy!
What you've written here is just so beautiful. I really love the image. Thank you so much. ♥ (Not empty, at all!)

When I write 'love' between a man and a man, I don't want the story to copy after it between a man and a woman. There must be something really special, I think. Or I hope.

Thank you, I hope I'll be able to post more. :)

And, of course! Please do! *hugs* I think I've just added you, but LiveJournal is really bad now, I hope I managed to do it. :/
(By the way, I really love the Dom in your icon... ♥)

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thekeyholder April 6 2011, 20:28:44 UTC
What you've written here is just so beautiful. I really love the image.

Ah, I'm glad to hear that! :) I guess there was still some inspiration in me after the writing session.

Thank you for the add! Btw, I'm Brigi. :)

starlight_myth made me the icon, she knows I have a thingy for the boys in the Bliss video. Your baby Matt is cute too, I also have a similar icon!

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deepseabed April 7 2011, 16:48:44 UTC
<3

Thanks for adding me. :)
I think I knew your name. :) I'm Minami. *shakes hands*

Oh, was that icon made by her? I really love them in that era. :)

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