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lahdeedah000 May 20 2015, 20:49:50 UTC
Oh my god thank you thank you thank you, this was so much more than what I asked for I can't say thank you enough >.<

CHARACTERIZATION was on point. ugh just all of Jinyoung's insecurities and the way JJP fight...and I just loved how realistic you kept it with their relationship dynamic. Even after they're together, they still fight, they still have their moments and disagreements and times when they just can't wrap their head around the other, but that's okay, because they know they'll always work through it together in the end because THEY LOVE EACH OTHER ;A;

and ughhh how STUBBORN they were was just sooooooo jjp like alsd;kfjewf you captured their personalities so well, and I especially loved Jackson and Mark in this as well. That moment when Mark got upset at Jinyoung had so much impact because Mark never has anything bad to say about him ever but also the way he apologized afterwards was just epitome of markjin sweetness...and Jackson was written so well too >.<

Whoever you are, thank you thank you thank you <3

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hipployta May 21 2015, 03:54:15 UTC
Awww...insecurities are tough...and I can understand how Jinyoung got wrapped up in his denial but it must have been so painful for Jaebum

Glad that they were finally able to take a step or two forward (and one back but that's life)

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electricdino May 22 2015, 13:20:52 UTC
This was a really good read and really realistically done. I'm a sucker for anything that resembles hurt/comfort in even the tiniest ways, I love a good bit of angst and emotion. So I really enjoyed this. Also... Jackson made me laugh. XD His response to Jinyoung after the cuddle was just spot on, XD

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