"Allure" - Hobbs/Raydor Fic

May 22, 2014 08:17

Title: Allure
Pairing: Hobbs/Raydor
Rating: T
Word Count: 2, 619 words
Disclaimer: Not my characters, not my television show.
A/N: This was written for the awesome, amazing, fabulous sharon_ray's birthday. Happy, happy, happy birthday to you my dear. As an added birthday bonus, each header links to the item named in the title. Thank you to kayryn for the ultra ( Read more... )

andrea hobbs, hobbs/raydor, fanfic, sharon raydor, major crimes

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singerdiva01_sk May 22 2014, 13:31:05 UTC
So I don't watch this show or know anything except that Sharon is played by MM but I was drawn in by the links to the pretty things and found that, even clueless, this fic is beautiful! Wonderful descriptions of both things and feelings and you write MM, no matter who she is playing, with her innate elegance. Thanks for sharing!

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defyingnormalcy May 24 2014, 12:02:46 UTC
and you write MM, no matter who she is playing, with her innate elegance.

That such a lovely thing to say, thank you! This is something that I certainly strive for when writing Laura or Sharon, so it means a lot to me that you feel this way.

Thank you for reading. :)

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obsessive_a101 May 22 2014, 15:37:52 UTC
*facepalms at the adorableness* How do you always manage to capture all the cuteness even when making it full of elegance and grace and hotness at the same time? :) It's very impressive.

Also, Happy Birthday to Sharon_ray! :D

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sharon_ray May 24 2014, 07:07:21 UTC
Thank you!!

And seconded. She's pretty darn great at what she does.

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defyingnormalcy May 24 2014, 12:53:26 UTC
How do you always manage to capture all the cuteness even when making it full of elegance and grace and hotness at the same time? :) It's very impressive.

These wonderful ladies do most of the work for me really, but being elegant, graceful, adorable, AND hot all at once. ;)

Thanks for reading!

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lanalucy May 22 2014, 21:34:45 UTC
"The hints of patchouli oil, tonka bean, musk, sandalwood, and vanilla absolute made the blonde’s mouth water."

Description's making my mouth water. And wish I could wear perfume.

This is a delightful catalogue of falling in love.

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defyingnormalcy May 24 2014, 12:56:38 UTC
Description's making my mouth water. And wish I could wear perfume.

It's a gorgeous perfume. Way out of my price range, but gorgeous nonetheless.

Thanks so much for reading. :)

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newnumbertwo May 22 2014, 21:40:16 UTC
I love the progression here. And this totally makes me appreciate Sharon's outfits more (I have zero fashion sense...).

Lovely, sweet, and sexy.

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defyingnormalcy May 24 2014, 13:00:59 UTC
I love fashion, as does sharon_ray, so this was tons of fun to write with 'fashion' in mind as a theme but also I would argue as a character in and of itself.

Thank you for reading. :)

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afrakaday May 23 2014, 05:07:09 UTC
Such a fun birthday fic! I love the shop links (that lulu tank is one of my faves) and the progression from strangers to lovers is poignant and sweet. Lovely birthday gift. :)

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defyingnormalcy May 24 2014, 12:59:49 UTC
Not going to lie, it was a lot of fun searching for the various items and then crafting a story around them. Thanks so much for reading, I'm glad that you enjoyed this. :)

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