Comments | delilah_joy: Fic: Point B (Xander/Jesse, NC-17)

delilah_joy

Fic: Point B (Xander/Jesse, NC-17)

Mar 14, 2010 15:48

Title: Point B
Fandom: Buffy the Vampire Slayer
Pairing: Xander/Jesse
Rating: NC-17
Setting: Pre-series
Length: 2900 words
Warning: Characters are underage, but both over the age of 16. (Sorry--it's hard to avoid with this pairing.)
Notes: Written formaleslashminis for lunabee34 , who wanted a sleepover, scary movies and junk food.

( Read more... )

btvs, slash, xander/jesse, fic

Comments 35

whichclothes March 14 2010, 20:12:16 UTC

This was so funny and sweet and hot and, right at the end, sad, too. Wonderful!

delilah_joy March 15 2010, 02:06:42 UTC

Thank you! I couldn't resist the touch of sadness at the end--Xander/Jesse is always kind of a bittersweet pairing.

devo79 March 15 2010, 02:37:57 UTC

Well, Whichclothes said everything I wanted to say so...ditto :)

delilah_joy March 15 2010, 03:02:00 UTC

Thanks--I'm glad you liked it! :)

katekat1010 March 14 2010, 21:38:49 UTC

ok, that was scrumptiously hot, and i absolutely adore how you were able to keep the first-time-feeling of it and yet still let them have a little bit of the 'we've done this before so we don't have to freak out about it' too - straddling that line perfectly. And the kiss at the almost-end is just perfect.

(and the only thing I'm sad about is the cannon events, but maybe in your fic world that doesn't happen - and maybe they can be 30 together *grin*)

delilah_joy March 15 2010, 02:35:48 UTC

Thanks so much! It was fun to write that kind of teenage tentativeness--it's kind of both poignant and hilarious the way that everyone thinks *they're* the only one who's scared and has no idea what to do. And I am definitely open to the possibility that this is a universe where Jesse and Xander have more time together. :)

brutti_ma_buoni March 14 2010, 21:51:55 UTC

That's a lovely piece of work - awkward and real, but so hot and eager too. It makes a great slice of might have been.

delilah_joy March 15 2010, 02:38:18 UTC

Thank you! I haven't written Xander/Jesse before (and haven't even read much, just because there isn't a lot of it), but I have this very protective feeling toward the two of them.

emelye_miller March 14 2010, 22:28:44 UTC

That was hot and heartbreaking. So very true and believable. Thank you for this.

delilah_joy March 15 2010, 02:41:47 UTC

Thank you--I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

sparrow2000 March 14 2010, 22:53:52 UTC

That was definitely tasty and well on its way to scrumptious land. Tender, sweet and hot. And the last line just killed me.

Beautifully done, hon.

delilah_joy March 15 2010, 02:59:17 UTC

Thanks so much! :D