Hey guys, how's my driving? Anything that could be fixed or changed about my character? Comments are screened, IP log is off, anon posting is allowed. I would prefer constructive criticism to blind complaints, but I'm willing to listen to any problems you might be having!

3rd person sample:

This place was so strange, even for someone like Rin.

Since turning fifteen, his whole life had turned upside down; he discovered the world of demons and exorcists, of new dangers, and the fact that while being raised as a human, in reality he was the child of the demon king Satan himself. This alone would have been enough to ( Read more... )

1st person sample:

[The feed turns on, and the first people see is the face of a strange looking cat. It purrs slightly, pawing at the Guide curiously before turning at an angry yell. The cat hops off-screen, revealing a rather angry-looking teenager arguing with one of the Vogons.]

I’m sick of filling out these damn forms! I want some answers ( Read more... )