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[desfinado]

Title: Backseat
Author: desfinado
Pairing: Gerard/Mikey/Frank
Rating: R
Word count: 1564
Disclaimer: They don’t belong to me; not making a profit.
Summary: Mikey spends most of twelfth grade watching Jersey from backseat windows.

Comments

[pearl_o]

You are seriously my favorite. This is full of really lovely visuals and atmosphere - I really like it.

This line is perfect:

And that's always what takes Mikey over the edge, when his knees start to shake and his eyes squeeze shut, balls drawing up tight: that feeling that he can struggle and push his chest out and hitch his hips up but his big brother will be there, Gerard will always be there ready to push right back.

[desfinado]

You are MY favourite, so glad you enjoyed this! I love brother dynamics so hard...

[mourning_night]

I really love the image of Frank chewing on the hoodie strings. They are all so casual about what happened it really fits with the wandering around aimlessly vibe of the beginning of the story.

[desfinado]

Thank you! I was hoping the descriptions would feel like a part of the story and the every-dayness of it rather than getting wordy.

[desfinado]

Glad you enjoyed, and that it felt unique! Thanks :)

[jinx_removed]

ahhh.
YOU ARE MY FAVOURITE OKAY!

[desfinado]

Thank you! :D

[romanticalgirl]

This is gorgeous and atmospheric and stark and lovely.

[desfinado]

Wow, thank you! I was trying hard for all of those things. So glad you enjoyed it!