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[desfinado]

Title: Proof
Author: desfinado
Reader: shiningartifact (posted here at her journal)
Pairing: Gerard/Frank (Lindsey/Gerard, Jamia/Frank)
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 6,400
Runtime: 40m 00s
Disclaimer: They don't belong to me; not making a profit.
Summary: Frank won't stop taking pictures in the studio while the band records their new album.
Notes: Completed for the 2011 pod_together

Comments

[mwestbelle]

Excellentttt *____* I love the perfect matching of voyeurism and exhibitionism, and how careful they both are after. They know they have other commitments, even if they might wish something else could happen. Loved it!

[desfinado]

Aw girl I am so thrilled you enjoyed it! It was a lot of fun to play with those elements, and I'm happy you felt it worked :D Thanks for commenting! (and seriously, CHECK OUT THE PODFIC. SO INCREDIBLE.)

[tabula_x_rasa]

OMGGGGGG this was gorgeous. Like, so incredibly visual-- all the colors. Amazing. And I loved the resolution. <333333

I haven't listened to the podfic yet, but I'm sure it is equally amazing and I'm downloading it for when I do get a chance!

\o/ FABULOUS.

[shiningartifact]

Isn't the story wonderful?? I really love it. <3 Hope you enjoy the podfic! :)

[desfinado]

Thank you, I'm so happy you enjoyed it and all the visuals. GET EXCITED, the podfic is incredible - really brings it to life! :D

Thanks for commenting ♥

[rokittomars]

How much do I love their wives?! How much?! They were seriously, my favorite part.

But there was something really interesting about the way this played out. The removed feeling throughout the whole thing. Like, Frank was looking at it from more of an artist's standpoint, more focused on the aesthetics than what was happening as a whole.

It also reminded me of that one studio pic of Gerard hunched over.

Can't wait to download the podfic when I'm back in my own state with an actual functioning connection!

[desfinado]

WIVES. YES. We spent SO much time figuring out the best way to work with them in this, because we really DO love them, and I'm thrilled to hear it worked for you :D

And the removed feeling! That was one of my favourite things to play around with, writing-wise, so I'm glad you enjoyed that.

(LOL that photo was TOTALLY in my mind too ♥)

Awesome, I can guarantee you will love it - it's beautifully done!

[roxy_palace]

That was... yeah... incredible. incredible story, incredible voice. What a stellar combination.

[desfinado]

Thank you so, so much! I was over the MOON about working with shiningartifact on this, her voice (and how hard she works to do things with it) IS incredible. I'm really glad you felt the writing worked as well, thanks for reading :D

[carmesim]

This fic hits so many of my kinks, it's not even funny. Gerard getting off on his own singing! Frank being a photographer! Every single image you wrote here was so fucking vivid, and yet there's so much of them revealed around each image, oh my god, how do you do it... And Gerard pretty much physically putting Frank's world back in perspective and then how Lindsey helps them kind of complete the circle so everyone involved gets to share this... amazing thing that they have! I'm babbling. This story is just so great.

Flawless fic. FLAWLESS.

[desfinado]

:D :D It makes me SO happy when a fic does that for me, it's so lovely to hear it hit all of YOUR kinks too! I had a lot of fun building those images, and working with their relationships with their wives too.

Thank you SO much for taking the time to read and comment. I hope you give the podfic a try, it really brings those images into SUCH vivid colour ♥