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Saiyuki Fic, Sorrow Floats--Chapter 4--NC 17

Jun 22, 2009 06:23

Title: Sorrow Floats, Chapter 4
Author: Despina_Moon
Pairing: Gojyo/Kanan
Summary: Gojyo has a surprising secret from his past he can no longer hide. Will it change everything in the present? Saiyuki AU. Mostly.

Many, many thanks to my beta readers, the amazing moshesque and the fabulous whymzycal. Those two have humored me and put up with months of whining and crying ( Read more... )

saiyuki, saiyuki fic, sorrow floats

Comments 13

suanz June 22 2009, 13:34:34 UTC

OMG!!! I'm the first. Yay!!!!!

Yes, I do realise I'm childish. =^_^=

And I have not read it yet. Will review once I do so right after this silly post. He He

suanz June 22 2009, 13:58:06 UTC

Ok. I'm done.

Gojyo's pain when Kanan slapped him, the memories that it brought back - that was powerful. I could feel his pain & agony. Going emo.......

Thank you so much. I really love this chapter.

lawless523 June 22 2009, 13:54:55 UTC

I like that Kanan's as complicated as Gojyo. But I smell heartbreak coming.

This was an especially gripping chapter. Bravo!

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thefacelessevil June 22 2009, 16:03:02 UTC

I'm pretty sure it wasn't Gojyo who burned down the place, if you get my drift.

thefacelessevil June 22 2009, 16:03:30 UTC

THIS STORY IS GOING TO END IN SO MUCH HEARTBREAK, WHY AM I STILL READING IT?

geri June 22 2009, 17:15:16 UTC

wow kanan seems to be losing her grip on reality sometimes and that is a scary thought. Revenge on people whose crossed her path and even taking it out on goyjo for a few minutes and than to smack him in his face the side with the scars on it luckily goyjo is to much of a man to have retaliated and struck back. But instead He closed his mind down and than the memories started when his mother scratched his during that time when she tried tried to kill him. So he did the only thing he could he ran as if the hounds of hell were after him. So possibly kanan is the culprit who burned down the flower shop.