Saiyuki Fic, Sorrow Floats--Chapter 6--NC17

[despina_moon]

Title: Sorrow Floats, Chapter 6
Author: Despina_Moon
Pairing: Gojyo/Kanan
Summary: Gojyo has a surprising secret from his past he can no longer hide. Will it change everything in the present? Saiyuki AU. Mostly.

Many, many thanks to my beta readers, the amazing moshesque and the fabulous whymzycal. Those two have humored me and put up with months of whining and crying

Comments

[caeseria]

I totally love this chapter! We get to see a bit more of young Gojyo and how he came to be a most excellent gambler! I love the priest too, a bit of foreshadowing for the future when he meets Sanzo (although I'm going to assume meeting Sanzo was a bit more of a shock).

I'm really excited to see what Chapter 7 holds now...

[laurabryannan]

I can see why you had fun writing this chapter. It was a blast to read. I loved Gojyo's drug-addled visions in the fireworks. *squeeeee*

Can't wait for more!

[pfmoi]

Mmm..this is pretty neat. i like the fortune teller.

[theskywasblue]

I've been following this story eagerly - though I haven't had time to comment on all the individual posts - but I just wanted to take time today to say that this is really great, you have me totally hooked! I can't wait to see what happens next.

And I had to laugh at the: He's not one of those emo shoe-gazers, is he? bit...

[geri]

Alright he's seeing his pass life in the stars.
Meeting the fortune teller and now seeing masato again, kanan waiting at home for him having sex and speaking about seeing her brother hakkai. Yes this story is getting more intriquing as the chapters go by.