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alwaysaboom September 17 2010, 05:53:09 UTC
[Ivanova stands in the doorway, in her blue and brown Earthforce uniform, not the black one she wears now. She hasn't moved to speak yet.]

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detectiveace September 17 2010, 18:19:02 UTC
[ Business was slow as usual-- The city seemed content to fester in its own crime.

But today was different.

Naoto looks up from her work to see a dame in the doorway. ]

May I help you?

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alwaysaboom September 17 2010, 18:49:24 UTC
Possibly. If you're as good as they say. What do you know about a man named Alfrted Bester?

[The military woman enters, her face serious and hard, betraying nothing.]

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detectiveace September 18 2010, 03:28:54 UTC
[ Naoto leans forward, her interest piqued. Fingers steepled, eyes as sharp as daggers. This is shaky ground, and she knows it. ]

What's there to know?

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girlshaveitgood September 17 2010, 06:09:27 UTC
[Nitori carefully pushes open the door, and peeks inside the office. He doesn't really need a detective - he seems to just be going around curiously, trying to find all of his friends.

Interestingly though, Nitori is not as he usually appears. Instead he is a young girl, with long, flowing hair and an old fashioned dress. Nitori peers around...it looks like an old movie, sort of. But then he...she spies Naoto, and speaks up.]

Um...Naoto?

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detectiveace September 17 2010, 17:52:16 UTC
[ Naoto's leaning back in her chair, her feet propped on the desk. In the real world, she would never take such a self confident, disrespectful action. But here was different.

So when Nitori walks through that door, Naoto glances up from her current (unfruitful) newspaper search. A spotlight shines on the young girl with flowing hair and classic dress.

It's like a final ray of innocence has graced the detective before all Hell broke loose. ]

Yes?

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girlshaveitgood September 18 2010, 01:24:42 UTC
[Nitori jumps a little when the spotlight shines on her, but she eases. After a second of peering at Naoto, it dawns on Nitori that he might not recognize...which is a little fair, given the gender-swap.

But that makes it a little awkward to be there. Oops. Maybe she can run away and no one will remember. ...But no, that's not right either. She shifts a little.]

...Do you remember me?

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detectiveace September 18 2010, 04:03:35 UTC
[ The face is familiar-- the two hadn't spoken since Naoto arrived, but she still remembered.

Arrived where? The name "Wonderland" came to mind. The image of a Mansion with green, green fields.

Wonderland. ]

Nitori-san. Yes, I do. [ Naoto stands, actually examining the scene. She seems kinda surprised. ]

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angel_junk September 17 2010, 09:01:27 UTC
[ Bhamba enters the room with slow and deliberate steps. He has adapted to the dream more than is healthy, wearing a black cocktail dress and matching elbow length gloves. His long, curly wig is a fiery red... or would be, if the scene wasn't sepia.

Bhamba Fatale saunters closer, surveying the mess in the room through critical, half-lidded eyes. He opens his purse and with a swift motion throws a photograph onto Naoto's desk. The photograph of a long lost crocodile.

His brown eyes gaze into the far off distance as he clutches both his hands to his chest and moans: ]

Help me, detective.

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detectiveace September 17 2010, 17:44:30 UTC
[ Cue the appropriate music for inner monologuing.

I knew she was trouble the minute she walked through that door. She was dressed to kill-- almost bursting at the seams, like a crooked cop's pockets. But with her was the faint smell of mystery, of danger. I couldn't resist.

Naoto sighs, reaching for the photograph.

Crocodile. Family: Crocodylidae. A loner that gnaws at the lost innocence that once believed in truth beneath the city's sewers. A predator. ]

Your name?

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angel_junk September 17 2010, 19:30:10 UTC
[ A cigarette appears in Bhamba's hand and is put onto an ivory cigarette holder. ]

Her name is Amy.

[ Bhamba lights the cigarette. ]

My name is...

[ He takes a long drag. ]

...irrelevant.

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detectiveace September 20 2010, 01:17:38 UTC
[ What seemed like two years and a day passed in tense silence. Linda, revealing her civil-man's bloodlust, crushed optimistic youths in a debate tournament. Naoto examined the dame with her cigarette. ]

I'll take the case. [ She speaks after a dramatic pause with apropriate music. ]

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azureflamegod September 17 2010, 16:11:15 UTC
[Kite opens the door and just... stands there. Staring.

He's really not used to this whole 'trippy dreaming' thing. How did everything turn sepia ohgod]

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detectiveace September 17 2010, 18:22:41 UTC
[ Another? Today seemed rather busy. Maybe there was hope for this godforsaken place after all? ]

May I help you?

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azureflamegod September 17 2010, 19:49:43 UTC
Naoto?

...What are you doing here?

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detectiveace September 17 2010, 22:29:33 UTC
[ Then something hits her like a ton of bricks:

She knows this boy. And he doesn't fit with this setting. ]

...Kite? [ Mansion. Wonderland. Events. They had all been so tired. ]

Is this an event?

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a) omgioweyouapstmybad b)im retarded and just tagged in the wrong place orz memento_m_o_r_i September 17 2010, 17:03:37 UTC
[Minato makes it as far as opening the door before standing there awkwardly. Sepia and then Neon is just a little much for his retinas at the moment.]

[ > You wanted to say something but your [Courage] isn't high enough! ]

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pfft. don't worry 'bout it, man. detectiveace September 17 2010, 19:25:46 UTC
Hello. [ Naoto gazes at the newcomer critically. ] Do you require my assistance?

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<3 memento_m_o_r_i September 17 2010, 20:42:10 UTC
[Minato nods to this cool detective character, though it's more in greeting than in confirmation.]

I'm sorry, I think I've become lost...where is this?

[He feels this scene is somehow familiar, but the boy is a music buff and thus Film Noir is lost on him.]

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detectiveace September 17 2010, 22:42:30 UTC
Wonderland. [ The answer's quick. If she took a moment to think about what she said, she might realize that "hey, this doesn't look like the mansion oh my gosh event." But this is a dream-- there's little thought involved. ]

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