Comments | dhorz: [Poem] No Binangkal, Penelope

dhorz

[Poem] No Binangkal, Penelope

Feb 22, 2008 13:47

I wrote this poem for lit class. Pardon me for the grammatical errors (not a native English speaker, *hides*)

Title: No Binangkal, Penelope
Author: Neerod
Notes: Written in Odysseus' point of view, as a response to the Visayan poem 'Binangkal, Penelope' by Corazon Almerino, which is about a woman telling Penelope (Odysseus' wife) that instead of ( Read more... )

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aiwritingfic February 22 2008, 06:22:57 UTC

*giggles* Oh, I love it! <3 That's so cute. <3 <3 <3

(I don't know what to say re: journal naming, because ... well, you can see how mine turned out. XD)

dhorz February 22 2008, 06:29:30 UTC

Thank you! *hearts you muchly*

Well, it just sort of came into my mind; I hate the 'h' in my username.
Don't know why I put it there in the first place; probably because some user here is named 'neerod', and that was the name I wanted. :D

aiwritingfic February 22 2008, 06:33:37 UTC

*laughs* That's sad. I usually "squat" on nicknames I like, but to be honest one's handle is such a big part of their identity, and there are so many facets to mine. And "kaleidoscope" would have been difficult for people to spell. XD

dhorz February 22 2008, 06:41:56 UTC

*nods* that's why I want a name change... *wails*

XD yeah, they're gonna have a hard time spelling 'kaleidoscope'. *laugh*

maryan23 February 22 2008, 06:35:38 UTC

wahaha. nkabasa bya q anang poem nimu dai 2ng wala pa nah gi-post!

^^

dhorz February 22 2008, 06:42:25 UTC

hawa diri dai. XD

maryan23 February 22 2008, 06:46:32 UTC

BLAH

dhorz February 22 2008, 06:49:47 UTC

asa ka yotch? naa ko ila dada. i-post na nako ang thingy karon (i mean, ang ficcy diay).

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a1y_puff February 22 2008, 09:37:36 UTC

wheee~ it's cute!
I'd say it's a unique poem ^^
I love the last line XD

dhorz February 27 2008, 05:39:08 UTC

Apologies for the late reply!

Thank you! :D The last lines are my most favorite too~

forbiden_past February 22 2008, 15:30:16 UTC

LOL

Your poem is really fun^^
Aren't we supposed
To eat them together? --> The most fun lines^^

dhorz February 27 2008, 05:39:39 UTC

Apologies for the late reply!

Thank you! :D The last lines are my most favorite too~~ I'm glad to know that you like it. :D *huggles*

ketchupblood February 23 2008, 02:32:35 UTC

That's a beautiful poem. And the end made me kind of... I don't know. It was lovely.

But I like "dhorz"! -flails- It sounds so cute! Though I've been thinking of the same thing, but STILL! *is a hypocrite*

dhorz February 27 2008, 05:41:11 UTC

Apologies for the late reply!

Thank you! :D *hug*

And the rename. Well, since I'm a plus user, I won't be able to change my name that easily...I don't even know if I can find the strength to change it at all. It has...sentimental value. XD