DIAMOND CITY STARBEANS APPLICATION POST 2

Jun 19, 2008 22:09

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why do i even rayeli October 19 2009, 07:19:57 UTC
Out-of-Character Information
Name: rayeli
Are you 13 or over?: i say to you, yes
LJ username (optional): rayeli
Time Zone: Pacific
AIM: lumsnomnom
Tegaki:
Anything Else?: BOO I SAY

In-Character Information
Name (and age/-relevance if applicable): Popple, 20
Series: The Adventures of the Incredible Popple, also known as Mario & Luigi RPG
Occupation or status upon arrival: SHADOW THIEF~

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Re: why do i even rayeli October 19 2009, 07:22:43 UTC
Misc. Notes:
he knew Birdo was a tranny all along he's just in denial

Example Post:
I think my work here is done, see? I've scoured all four corners of the Beanbean Kingdom, filched the town center, and broke into the royal castle itself! There's nothing left fer me here, and I'm sick of those royal chumps breathing down my neck! It's time to expand my ambitions beyond the borders of this goody goody two shoes kingdom!

But where is Popple, the amazing and spectacular Shadow Thief, to go?

Hmm, I gotta find me a map in the town center somewhere. Surely those shopkeepers got maps for navigating through foreign lands in the secret storage room somewhere. The dead of night is always the best time to sneak in, hehe. Ya know, this might be my last robbery in this kingdom for a while. I'll cherish every moment of it!

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Re: why do i even of_assistance October 19 2009, 18:31:16 UTC
Think you could go over your app again and fix all the mentions of Smash Academy? ^^;

I'll be happy to approve this once you do.

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Re: why do i even rayeli October 19 2009, 18:43:30 UTC
OH MY. I thought I deleted that part.

I can't seem to edit that post, so I'm going repost the personality section here. Extremely sorry! OTL

BackstoryPopple hails from the Beanbean kingdom, hence the green skin. He began his little career as a robber after his first and only actual job in the Beanbean Castle Town fell to pieces. Popple was fired within a week (in Popple's version of the story, he ''quit'). Popple decided he just wasn't cut out for actual work and honest pay, so he adopted a alter-ego of sorts and became Popple, the shadow thief. Soon enough he became known as a public nuisance for obsessively stealing and robbing everyone in his path. Wanted posters were set up, nightguards were set on high alert, but the shadow thief proved difficult to capture. Soon enough, Popple expanded his work to the lands surrounding the Castle Town, seeking more ways to make quick cash ( ... )

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rayeli October 19 2009, 18:47:43 UTC
I mean 'background'. This one's the personality section.

Personality:Popple is the most infamous thief to scour the land of the Beanbean kingdom (or so he claims). And he's a bit of a kleptomaniac-if he sees something valuable, he will try to steal it. If it's not worth a scrap, he'll take it anyways just to prove that he can, and/or to avoid paying. He hasn't had a real job in years, so he's kind of broke all the time. Not that having money will stop him with coming up with ways to avoid paying. With no job or home to go to, Popple depends on his experience in thieving to get him by. In fact, he's been doing it so long, stealing junk has become his very way of life, and gosh darn if anyone tries to straighten him out ( ... )

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FIRST APPROVAL bigsisterbunny October 19 2009, 18:52:35 UTC
Awesome!

The personality section with the strike-outs was actually okay, it was the part of the backstory about going to school that I was worried about.

Anyway, have your first approval!

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therealrobotnik October 19 2009, 19:11:21 UTC
Awesome work. I like the app and hereby give you the Robotnik Stamp of EPIC APP.

You know what to do!

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lurkinurshadows October 20 2009, 23:03:46 UTC
Thanks! Sorry again for that mistake :

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shootmedown October 21 2009, 03:13:31 UTC
Fff! It's fine! Just put the cleaned-up version of the app in Poppy's journal so I can add it to the charater/app directory! XD

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