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[one-shot] In Training

Feb 24, 2009 11:00

Title: In Training
Author: diamondsofsix
Beta: lykwhoah
Prompt: #38 Complain
Rating: pg/pg-13
Genre: General, angst (hurt/comfort?)
Pairing(s): Yoko/Ohkura
Words: 2400
Author's Notes: Watching the latest can!jani episode with Yoko and Ohkura training at the temple I got pretty inspired.

( It's cold, dark and the only comfort they have is each other- finding ones strength in the weirdest of places. )

yoko/ohkura, yokoyama, one shot, eito, fanfiction, ohkura, diamondsofsix:k8kattun

Comments 15

girlearthless February 28 2009, 04:06:10 UTC

Oh. ;__; I loved this. Not only because it's Yoko/Ohkura (and I had been thinking of writing about what happened in that room at night) but because your Yoko was really great.

He seemed practically immune to rejection, but Yoko was not. Frankly; he was terrified of it.

Aw. I can see why too. Yoko's always so confident on screen but he probably harbours a lot of insecurities too.

Thanks for writing this! ♥

diamondsofsix February 28 2009, 09:54:58 UTC

Thank you!! ♥♥♥ (and are we plot-buddies or what?).

Yoko to me always appear really insecure. Like he's always very busy studying other people after he has said a joke, and he immediately back pedals if there's even the slightest chance it failed. Hina on the other hand just shrugs his shoulders and moves on. And Yoko admits it too, he never dare asking anyone out to eat, because he's so scared they will say no, bless him ♥

lastingdreams8 May 13 2009, 08:25:03 UTC

I love the way you write Yoko; I feel like I'm getting to know him better through these fics:)
I love the way you wrote the pairing in this too; I feel like Okura would ask such questions, and even though it's comfortable and thought provoking, it's comfortable:)
<3

thier_sess November 22 2009, 00:27:47 UTC

I've just read this fic a moments ago (and some others as well) and I must say I'm very impressed. Honestly, I don't really like Kanjani8 fanfics that are not gen and I hate venturing into jent_fanfics as there are lots of just awful fics, but I really liked it and I'm really happy I gave this a chance. It was more than worth it ( ... )